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Lil Penpusher
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Lil Penpusher
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CRITICAL DEPRESSION!
Ugh... I actually feel like crying now.
Damn! What a an amazing story you created!
I always wondered who was behind the murder of the King & how exactly Garibald fit into it.
Are you planning on creating a continuation of this or more Equestria at War in general?
Edit: Never mind the last part, I just saw your other stories!
As usual, the great story writed by the great writed
Why i’m not suprised
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Practically all of my current and planned projects are EaW-based in some capacity. So... myes!
awesome story mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter
Love me some Wingbardy in Equestria at War. This is a great moment in the backstory to write about, just before everything falls apart and sets the continent aflame.
Intentional mishearing or unintentional misspelling?
Snoring?
"They" or "he?" If the intention is the royal 'we,' then it should probably be "our imperial majesty" to make the pronouns match. Otherwise, change "they" for "he."
Your griffons appear very human on page, which isn't a bad thing, but sometimes I forgot they walk on all fours with wings and beaks. I would've liked more reminders of their wings, particularly during the climax. Poor Garibald doesn't fly towards this father? Surely that would be faster. The cloaked griffon just runs off? Perhaps they fly away, leaving a fluttering cloak trailing down through the night after they get far enough. Blood dribbles from Gumberto's mouth? It dribbles down from his beak.