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DarkShadowSpark


Pone - about 50/50% sound/insane :) - Humans are lame, Pones are best

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ngl this kinda reminds me of morbius but with a couple scenes switched out and a lot less murder

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I can only say so much, itˋs not as I donˋt even know what that is (other than a film). But Iˋm no guy for real murder and dark things so...yeah

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nah its just like the testing part and the evolution bit, not saying i want it to be like morbius oh btw i was talking about the film i never saw the comic version so i wouldnt know but i actually like where the story is going im wondering if somebody is gonna sense the magical disturbance because you never know when the military is looking out for but ima just have to wait but this is a nice concept you got going on and a relatively new idea so I hope you keep it going for atleast 30,000 words but hey beggars cant be choosers

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I never watched the film in the first place, i just know of it. I cańt stand horror by any means

Edit: Ehhhh this story is complete. Itˋs a TF/TG story with porn and kinks. I never intended to write more as i donˋt even know what i would write. The time of the experiment in the story is the exact time i started writing and half of that time was translating it all.

Sorry if that´s not what you thought, but I probably will never have an idea how to continue. I see alicorns as incredible strong, even its just a human turned to one. So yeah Ethan would probably just buck their asses - litteraly.

Edit of edit: Even it it gets continued, it wouldnˋt be any more porn. I can say that much. That idea is out of the window

I like this

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thats ok either way you still got a story out and best of all you didn't leave the story on hiatus and still not put "cancelled" despite it being 5 years ago and you wrote a pretty good story on the fly and its just a one shot of which im sure many more are to come and this one met my expectations but really what im trying to say flat out is that this is good and thanks for taking time to reply to my previous comment have a nice day and next time you decide to write a story get those 3:00 am/im about to go to sleep creative juices flowing

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I think a simple Twi tells all I have to say to your nice comment.:twilightsmile:

Yeah, never intended to write this until 2:30 in the morning xD

Haven't read it yet, but the description sounds a lot like the Ponies After People universe

Is there any intended connection here to that?

This needs to be loved more I fully agree with this. Also like the art picture where did you get it? :3 ... Also the fiction is pretty hot as well in some parts of the rear end :3 .... Since it is complete I like to judge on this fiction at hoof. I believe this is at least a 7/10 for me. above average.

No enter gaps. The fiction looks pretty neat like a professional.

*1*

^ It's the same thing but not [ hr ] but it's a style of your own. Congratulations.

I hoisted my smartphone upwards and pointed it to me too to activate it´s face recognition, a big grin on my muzzle at what I was about to tell him.

*Face not detected. Try again.*

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No direct connection, other than that it is a serum that transforms.

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The Art Picture is from derpibooru, I saw it there and thought to write a Story to it. If you tap the Image itself in the right bottom corner you will be brought to the Image itself on derpibooru...thanks, I totally agree with you itˋs pretty hot isnˋt it...7/10? Totally enough for me. I also wrote it for my own good, even if it would be hated into the ground I still would be proud to have written it

Could you maybe explain that? Honestly I am lost there:rainbowhuh:

I like it how poeple seamingly random scroll through the comments and dislike them all. Donˋt know why, but couldnˋt care less:rainbowlaugh:

I'll say this much: this was quite enjoyable. I give it 10 on the :yay:itude meter.
I'll be looking forward to what you might write next.

I love this story

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Awww thanks:twilightblush:

A solid 10 on the :yay:meter is the best I could get xD

How did this git feature?

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Thatˋs the question isnˋt it

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Took me 20 min to find the missing 100 words to get exactly 11.000 on the spot:rainbowwild:

Thanks I appreciate it. There will be a Story with all of the Main 6 (two to be exact). Kinky and weird as all of them here will be.

This was great. I wonder what would happen after this..?

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Maybe and just maybe I get an idea what to do after that. We will see someday:twilightsmile:

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I'll be around if you want someone to toss around ideas with.

Usually I hesitate to read humab ti piny stories but I enjoyed this one. The descriptions were nicely detailed

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Thanks for giving it a try and liking it! I usually explain things in quite grand details up to it being almost to much:twilightsmile:

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