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This is a potentially-one-off story about an alicorn disguised as an earth pony. Unfortunately, alicorn magic doesn't like to be suppressed and must be let out once in a while so it doesn't explode.
Join some unnamed alicorn OC pony as they burn off some excess energy while trying to avoid detection.
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Would be 1000 times better if Rainbow found her and the truth. Alicorns hiding their actual forms is so cliche. And Twilight used to be the fandom's favorite to do something like this.
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I decided not to include a reveal in this story to give me the option for potential continuation.
I will watch your fiction with great interest young writer for your story has capture my interest.
I disagree with being found. It is cliché to have her found. They always get found and the main character gets dragged through the following events. The mane six won’t leave said character alone and the Princesses drag her into princess hood. “This is your destiny because RACE, submit and obey!”
I’m sick of that.
Having her not be casually found because she needed to blow off steam is probably one of the best things I've seen done relating to Alicorn OCs. The only situation she should be found out if she's in life threatening danger.
Also, please don't pull the Alicorn = Princess cliché. I fucking hate that, makes it feel like a Mary Sue.
This is very good story!
I always love someone trying their best to hide their true form from the main cast. Especially when they have so many ways to be detected.
If I was our protagonist, I'd probably move somewhere without an alicorn to detect me, but maybe she has a good reason to be there. Who's to say? Anyways, I hope she manages many daring escapes, while the main six try numerous times to discover her true identity. Great story.
I really like this I hope to see more of this and other characters
This was nice. It'd be great to see more with this character.
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the rent in ponyville is just too good to pass up
kind of an interesting topic, one could imagine there's tons of hidden alicorns out there just trying to be normal with celestia kind of setting too good of an example
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I don't see why. Not like there's anything dangerous. The last I heard was some tiny parasprites were flying around and they couldn't damage anything.
Weird how the home insurance is so expensive though.