Time has passed in Equestria and after years of fighting for Friendship, Twilight is the proud mother of a young colt called Bright Spark, a genius like his mother; but unlike Twilight he’s an evil genius. His goal? To become the greatest villain the world has ever seen, and with the help of his friend Luminosité (daughter of Rarity) and the Code of the Villains, nopony will stop him.
This story is a translation as the rest of my works, you can see the original here
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Could use a bit more editing for the bits of awkward grammar. Bit still not a half bad start.
loved it the idea of twilights child being evil perfect
Is Twilight child based of Sombra from overwatch? Also good story looking forward to more.
And in steps Twilight who REALLY wants her son in that school
This story is really interesting and has great potential. Only thing I don't get is what their motivation is. Why do they want to be villains?
Is the the Code of the Villains based off of the Evil Overlord List?
Well, that’s ONE way to fence any stolen loot! Who’d EVER expect Flurry?
And here I thought Flurry would be joining their little group, oh well.
Sniff*
Is that... Shipping I smell?
This story is so fast... though I love to see other M6 children
So that's Bright's villain origin story...
Oh this RICH! The baddies are in more a freakin’ panic than the ponies are! I am LOVING THIS STORY!
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I find it rather amusing myself.
Lol now even the villains want to stop these guys. This is going to be awesome!
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To be fair Bright was only five years old when this happened
So. little Dolly is using her “talents” for good? I can get behind that.
Sweetie’s Cooking!
There is no greater evil.
Now that was a great chapter. I loved the introductions and the big confrontation. Can't wait for the next chapter...
First thing, EDITOR! or at least proof read.
Other than that, LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
Why have you only responded to one of the comments here?
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Sorry, I'm not used to answer comments. But if you want to ask me something, I'll respond gladly
Nice. Way to kick things up a notch.
This was just priceless! Tirek FINALLY got a serious ass-kicking instead of the pat on the nose that he got in the show
I'm glad Luminosity still has enough sanity to realize she needs help, and that she still loves her mother despite all her psychological issues.
Um... I think you might mean iconic
Ironic has a whole different meaning
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As one might say, "Because it's fuckin' fun!"
Oh poor Grogar, (the only villain besides Brights and Lumi that’s worth the respecting) While he will not get trounced he is about to get a real eye opener.
Also, way to go BRIGHTS!!!!! Fail that test, fail that test, fail that test!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Radiation sickness\chemo therapy or is it chemo therapy\Radiation sickness either way there are only a few people that deserve to out like that while there are many that it is arguable. Grogar is one of the arguable ones as far as I’m concerned.
And the seriously believe that “Harmony” is their ally and friend, that stupidity is the saddest part of this whole thing
OH HOT DAMN
Now who would the bell choose?
I got nothin,
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I love the story please make a Number 2 To the first one
oh I would love to see what happens next
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There's sequel, but in Spanish. I haven't translate it yet because it's t finished yet, but here it is if you want check it out:
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/12424606/1/El-manual-de-los-héroes
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I agree, that was rather sweet of her.
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Yeah.
I must say that I'm not liking your portrayal of Twilight. She's Seasons 6 & 7 levels of stupid.
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Why do you say that?
I'm beginning to see why Spike moved to the Crystal Empire.
You cannot be serious!
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Maybe, but this story wouldn't work any other way. Besides, you have to consider Bright is only ten. I think is understandable why Twilight dobut he is really Mister Z.
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Do you think Twilight would actually be in the dark for that long, or was that just necessary to make the story work?
This story hasn't impressed me overly much but this chapter was neat.
I really do wonder why nobody figured out that Grogoar has (what I assumed is) a magical fear aura and worked to mitigate it yet.
Damn... this 10 year old kid is an ass hole... lol
Personally I would have liked to see Bright struggle with a different mental issue, but it’s good.