• Member Since 2nd Jun, 2022
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LovelyFlowerBloom


Hi-Ho! I like writing stories. Trying to get better at it all the time :P

Comments ( 12 )

Pick either past tense or present tense, and stick with it. Switching back and forth is incredibly jarring to readers.

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Yeah, I know. I've tried working on it.

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For real, fix that, and this will likely be popular. Simple wincest always is.

Make this anthro then count me in

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Maybe I'll make an anthro version of it.

Ok I gotta read this, mostly just for the princest. That and the cover art cracks me up, I know it's supposed to be sexy, but it kinda looks like Celestia is eating Lunas face. NOM!

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Would not object, Even though I still read this one.

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It isn't the best art, but it was the only I could find that had Season 1 Luna X Celestia.

I like it, you get a thumbs up from me.

To whomever put this into the general folder of the “Celestia X Luna Shipping (lunestia/princest” group, please remove this story from the general folder, it belongs in the clop folder.

This was a pretty good little story; not amazing, but good. The premise is simple, but you clearly understood what it needed. If it were me, I would have made this a bit longer with more buildup, but that's just me. There were some mechanical issues here and there, and some weird formatting, but it didn't ruin the story for me.

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