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When Twilight Sparkle accidentally transforms Rainbow Dash into a stallion, Rainbow's entire life is flipped on its head. He has to cope with changes in his body and his friends. How will this affect his budding romance with Applejack? Are Rarity and Fluttershy suddenly giving him the eye?
Twilight Sparkle is working 'round the clock to find a way to break the spell, but will she be able to make time for Big Macintosh?
Our heroes scamper to piece together the fragments of their lives after the events of The Prince and the Workhorse. Will the loose ends continue to fray, or will some degree of normalcy return to the citizens of Ponyville? Find out as the story unfolds in RAINBRO DASH!

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YES YES YES YES YES!!:pinkiehappy:
I've been looking forward to this

This oughta be good. :rainbowdetermined2:

Yeeeeeeaaaaaah. It's here. Will be watching...

It begins! :pinkiehappy:

Still hope Cadence, Shining and Celly are gonna get some comeuppance for playing Pretty Princess(And Prince) Relationship Wreckers last fic...

Heck, since this situation is technically their fault, maybe Rainbow could coordinate with Luna to arrange some indoor thunderstorms in the royal chambers...

This. I have been waiting for this.

And seriously, I hope Cadence, Celestia and Shining get some nasty karma.

Quite the gender-bender, I gotta say. Apart from the obvious male-oriented problems, I'm eager to see plenty of interaction between Rainbow Dash and Applejack. He'll want to be affectionate, of course, and I wonder how much Applejack will be able to stand. --and there's always the option that at the end of the day he LIKES being male and decides to stay that way. :trixieshiftright:

YES! Are you gonna submit this to EQD? (I haven't checked on there in forever)

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Yes, I wanna finish at least one more chapter, first. :twilightsmile:

653691Cool. I think this'll attract much more attention than tPatW, given the nature of it. Anyway, keep on writing man.

This is going to be gooooooooooooood. :pinkiehappy:

And it continues? Marvelous! As last time, faved and liked.

Your writing style is excellent in that nothing is ever left out. Previously, you managed to keep who knows how many storylines balanced and brought to a conclusive end, and now, you have (so far) one single one to work off of. Can't imagine how nice this one turns out! :twilightsmile:

Oh, quick question: Rainbow's known to be gay at the end of Prince/Workhorse, so does his new male self swing that way? It'd be an interesting continuity with the Braeburn magazine- moreso if AJ finds it.

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I have been struggling with that very question... :rainbowhuh:

653867 There's one answer, but given how poor my predicting with your works has been, I'm likely gonna be miles off of whatever you end up doing. I suppose that if it's written in the genetic code for him to prefer his own gender, then Rainbow and Applejack are going to have a sad moment. Bah, I'm looking too far ahead for now, best to focus on the present.

I have a hypothesis as to why they can't figure out the enchantment:

Twilight's spell didn't enchant Rainbow. It disenchanted him. This is what Rainbow naturally looks like.
His parents had his gender changed either because they wanted a filly or because they thought he looked too girly for a colt (even by pony standards).
This explains why even the princesses can't disenchant him, and fits with how Rainbow was a tomboy and a lesbian.

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Always a possibility... Guess you'll have to wait and find out :coolphoto: <--- poker face
For once, I actually know ahead of time what happened. I think you still might end up being surprised.

male :rainbowdetermined2: plus female :ajbemused: means great chapters in the future!

I think I like. And am most definitly interested in what you can do with this.

I haven't read any of your other stuff, but this seems really promising. Your writing style is fluid and engrossing, and the idea is really interesting. I just hope Rainbow Dash ends up turning back to normal, and that the Appledash works out (I'm a sucker for that ship and for happy endings in general :derpytongue2: ). Anywho, I sense some super hilarious awkwardness up ahead, and I can't wait. Keep up the awesome work :pinkiehappy:

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I'm really glad you enjoy it :pinkiehappy:
I highly recommend reading my previous fic "The Prince and the Workhorse" if you want to get the full backstory of this one as it is a direct sequel.

Why is Blueblood there?

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Because he was there at the end of The Prince and the Workhorse (the previous story).

I never say no to a gender bending story this isn't an exception tracking.. .:rainbowwild::scootangel:

Yay! Definitely going to be keeping an eye on this one now. Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Fluttershy you better not try to seduce Rainbow, or you'll become the next dessert course at sugarcube corner!:pinkiecrazy:
On the other hand i hope the Appledash survives, but since Applejack is a lesbian, the only way for that to occur is through retransformation

I wouldn't expect Rainbow to be the type of pony to able to sit still for more than five minutes, but she does realize if she gets used to that new body what happens when she turns back into a female. I guess recovering what she already knew will be easier than not doing anything until she turns back. Also I'm getting some vibes from Fluttershy, she was straight so didn't want her relationship with Dash to go anywhere but now she's a guy so maybe she will try something? I hope she does.

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If i might advise something, you might wanna read this to find some clues for this particular question: http://mangafox.me/manga/idol_pretender/

In short words, a boy who was straight will be straight as a girl too as also the brain and hormone parts have changed however she will also still love the girl she had loved as a boy.
For RD that means she´s gay as a guy but also in love with AJ. It´s more interesting that way as FS/RY are VERY interesting in male RD, but male RD slowly noticed her now gay 'male' brain to see lovely features on other stallions which she had never dreamed of before as a mare.
You see, when she was a mare FS/RY didn´t wanted anything from her but she from them or atleast FS. Now that she´s a male, both wants her badly but her male turned brain is STILL gay, so she´s not as much into mare bodies as before. Oh the irony! :rainbowlaugh:

Love it love it love it! I'm so happy you're continuing. I swear, it's like your writing style and particular canon of the mane six are like drugs to me. Also, one quick question, will Braeburn and his little... magazine debut pop up in this story, or was that a one time thing? Either way, I cannot wait for the next chapter!!

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he may do more than "pop up" but we'll see...

Hurr hurr, I had the 69th like! But seriously, man, good job. I hope you can make it onto EqD, but be warned, I know from experience that they're pretty sensitive with any mention of dicks.

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Yeah, I found that out the hard way HEYOH :pinkiehappy:

But seriously, through trial and error. Allen to Ashes got rejected and I'm pretty sure it was because of its liberal mention of dicks.

Celestians, huh? Hopefully we get some Lunatics before this is all over.

I like the sound of this love triangle.

Lovin it man. Your stories typically leave me stumped, (not something that happens often) and this is no exception. In excited to see how things pan out. I'm also getting the vibe that Pinkie knows something. Or she's pregnant.

Hah, it's always the quiet ones that turn into hellcats in the sack. Go Twilight!

I'm more curious to how all the relationships are going to turn out. I'm speculating a lot of conflicts are going to come up when RD starts to feel slighted when her relationships hinge on her gender rather than her inner-personality. Looking forward for the next installment.

692458 That .... somehow makes so much sense and is just crazy enough to be true

692458 It makes sense!!! I did not know such a condition existed, but hermaphrodites exist, so it makes sense.

Poor Dash. He's got so much swag he doesn't know what to do with himself.

672929 actually it isnt stated she is a lesbian, its more of she liked Rainbow as a tomboy but draws the line at flat out masculinity, it is completely possible at this point that she just doesn't like stereotypical male athletes. Not enough info on this yet. :rainbowwild:

Got a feeling Mr. and Mrs. Pie were devout Celestians, and thus it brings back unpleasant memories for Pinkie.

692458 Wow...that does make a ton of sense...

693871 Eh, it sounded like they were establishing that AJ was gay, by distinguishing being the type of lesbian who is into butch/masculine women and being actually interested in men. A lot of people who aren't queer, or who aren't into masculine-presenting women themselves (like me, I'm a bi girl and I prefer my women femme) sometimes have trouble getting the difference.

693871 695585 is correct. It's not a matter of behavior. Applejack loves Rainbow's personality but can't get past the body.

Oh poor Rainbow Dash, everypony is fetishizing you...

Just to make this comment- in France, they don't traditionally (or at all) call their waiters garcon, since garcon means boy. And, since waiters are traditionally fully grown men there...you get my point. Monsieur, or Madame if it is a girl, is more common. While garcon may be in play since it might deal with stereotypes, it wouldn't make sense if it were a traditional cafe.
but, umm, you don't have to change it if you don't want to...:fluttercry:
(darn my lack of accents! My French teacher would highly disapprove!)

Dude, I loving the exploration of sexuality in this story. The only thing that stuck out to me was the sea legs line. Shouldn't it be "land legs" because you mention back from vacation? Wouldn't you get your sea legs on it? Just nit picking, but it stuck out to me.

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That line really gave me trouble. In the end, I settled on "sea legs" because her brain is still cruising a sea of endorphins.
It was tricky. I'm still not 100% happy with it.

It's 2:30am and I'm laughing aloud at Pinkie Pie talking about peeing while standing up. Seems legit, for Fellstorm's talent... :eeyup:

693188 Crap you have a point there.

693188 Crap you have a point there.:ajbemused::rainbowhuh::flutterrage: This will not end well

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