Writer, artist, musician. Im just trying out all sorts of things... and now im trying my hand at fan fic. this should be interesting
Banished from the hive, Changeling 42 must now find a new home. After his banishment he becomes friends with an odd little pony named Minty Fresh. Now living with his new pony friend, 42 must find his place in Ponyville and get the other ponies to like him. But is there something growing in between him and Minty? Only time will tell
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I have to say the close similarities between this and the story "Thrown Abroad" are disturbing.
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oh... my... yes, I have read Thrown Aboard. It is actually what inspired me to write about a changeling. Thank you Firebirdtops for bringing this to my attention. But the only similarities to our stories is the actual banishment. The rest is and will be completely different. I would like to say that I am a rather big fan of Niaeruzu and his writings and I apologize to anyone who may be offended by my writing.
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Well thank you
Aside from kinks in your grammar (most frequently concerning quotation marks; I suggest taking a peek at EQD's Editor's Omnibus, it's really helpful) and a few kinks in formatting, I think this is a good start. Now I'm just curious to see how this'll pan out!
Dunno why anyone would be offended by your writing, though. That just sounds silly
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wow, thank you. I actually was more fearful of you being offended. I feared that you would think that I was plagiarizing your idea.
the answer to the universe is 42.... LOL!
I will be trying to read this though, looks good unfortunately I have bitten off more then I can chew as of late and not sure if I will get a chance to enjoy this.
1297970 take your time and read in section. There's no need to rush reading my silly tale. just enjoy, and thanks for reading!
Hmm she know soo much about his powers that is little creepy xD
So the changelingg is a music lover, you say?
This had better not be "Bon Bon is a Changeling" fic.
Why did he call himself 26 when he's 42?
Edit: The acceptance was rather fast and unrealistic.
I'm not sure I'm following all this. So far, Minty is being a bit of a Mary Sue. She isn't that realistic in her character. Unless that all turns out to be an act, I sugest you try to make her more realistic.
... It would be a LOT better if you TOLD us what it was she FOUND OUT ABOUT HERSELF!
She is buffalo !
1431124 Thank you for your comments, critiques, and for reading. However, 42 is not going to be stealing anypony's form at all. So no "Bon-Bon is a changeling Fic. Minty's discovery will be revealed in the next chapter. I left it open for a dramatic effect. I also agree with your statement about Minty, I am currently working on fixing that. Again, thank you for your comments and concerns.
Pleas write more!
1430974 authors name, lolz