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God bless you
You're the best! <3
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No, you're the best!
Wonderful chapter.
Nice, short, sweet. Overall, a great story and tone for this sort of thing, with the flow going well, and moving right along to the part that the reader is typically most interested in, while still having a plot to it, so it's not all just that. Good stuff.
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Thank you for giving a detailed comment! I'm glad you liked it!