I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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>TFW someone finally wrote Sunny x Argyle
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Yeah, it's about time, right? Not like someone didn't write one way back in June.
Nice. I wrote some Sunny x Argyle clop before, but this blows it out of the water!
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... oh yeah.
Well shit, if I don't remember reading it, it'll be new to me again!
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Thank you. I, umm... I have to admit that I forgot that you'd already written a fic where Argyle teaches Sunny to skate and then fucks her. Now I feel kind of bad, even though I swear I wasn't copying you. I came up with my plot when I saw the pic I used.
On the upside, I went back and reread your fic, and enjoyed it a second time.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499951/derby-days
Also this one
As soon as I saw this pic, I knew someone would write something like this.
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Of course. Why would Hasbro even release promotional art if they didn't want somebody to lewd the ponies?
"After all, nothing strengthens the bonds between father and daughter more than a father taking his daughter as his mare, right?"
If you seriously think this is a valid question. Then you have NO RIGHT to be in public, or near children. Ever.
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Indeed. No pony is to be left unlewded.
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I keep wondering: why some people assume everyone who writes foalcon is a pedo but, for example, no one called me a mass murderer for writing my Wallflower fic? It seems like the ability to separate fiction from reality is selective in some cases.
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Sorry to hear that
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So, are you more bothered by the underage sex or by the incest in that sentance? This is important to me for gauging reader interests.
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Yep. Lewd all pones.
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Sorry to hear that. No one should have to go through anything like that, especially as a child.
Sorry, not sorry
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You're a bad influence on me.
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Both. It's bad enough you made Argyle a pedophile. But then add the incest to make it even worse.
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Noted. Next time I'll reverse that order and be sure to make Argyle attracted to his daughter first, then add the foalcon on afterward. Hope that helps make your reading experience more pleasurable.
well that went from 0 to 100 in 2 lines
and then back to 0 with the last paragraph
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It's an important time in any filly's life, giving her first blowjob.
Sunny nodded happily. "Yep! Hitch says I'm even better than Sprout is when it comes to sucking his dick!" she bragged.
This part cracked me up!
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It's always sweet to see a young filly take pride in what she's best at. I call it a sign of good parenting.
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Let's face it, we all know Sprout's got another One True Love distracting him.
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Yeah, Sprout's probably better at eating a mare out than Sunny due to all the practice mommy gives her little sugarcube.
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I mean... I think we can all agree that there is a slight difference in tone.
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Eh, Izzy can help her catch up. ;)
But seriousy, I'm still amazed the "handsome sherriff/yes I am Mommy" exchange was put in there and animated the way it was. I mean *wow*.
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OTP
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p.s. you can spoiler an image
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That’s okay, no harm done. And thanks for enjoying the story again!
Death by Jamaharon
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and her first rut
Yes and no. You know what you did.
Mega bruh
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I'm not sure why you've commented bruh on every entry in this contest, but I am happy to see I've earned a mega bruh.
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Oh my good sir, your stories description alone has granted you this honor. I do not give my 'Bruh's to just anyone, but you have truly blown my socks off with such a...
repulsive, insane, dear god why would a father do that!? no just nounique perspective on family bonding. This truly is a mega bruh moment.11168352
Spoken like someone who actually read it.
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Sadly I cannot afford to bring myself to read such.... enriching literature.
This was a really good story though it suffers from some serious tonal whiplash, very early on it lets you know that Argyle is very open about his relationship with Sunny, creating some good humor out of the unexpected. It then proceeds along this line when you find out that not only is she giving blowjobs to Hitch & Sprout, but they're also, all 3, providing them to Argyle, topping out the porn logic meter by including that Argyle also shares Sunny with the local baker (and from there presumably others). This isn't to say this is bad, but the increasing porn-logic absurdity creates a certain humorous expectancy in the mind that then goes careening at 60mph into the ending like a brick wall.
This story is well made, please don't mistake this for anything else, but it would have been far better served to have picked 1 lane rather than attempting both. This story was heartwarming and humorous, but the ending takes it simply too-far in the other direction while at the same time undercutting the punch just a bit with the lion king reference. Had this story ended on everything going dark for Argyle, or with Sunny going to sleep with her father on top of her after the humorous comment of Stallions falling asleep afterwards, then you've created a much more fitting bittersweet ending. Us in the audience know what has happened, but we haven't just watched it emotionally destroy the cinnamon roll that is filly Sunny.
If you instead prefer the gut punch, then keep the story itself more serious and remove the porn-logic from the story, give them as realistic a relationship as you can, so that the story feels like it's building to that particular ending with drama & heart.
Damn, I'd really like a prequel to this. Like Sunny's first bum sex time ^^
P. S. ew, the ending.
I love the story, though not so much as I love reading comments where a moron goes into a story with a foalcon warning, reads the story, then bitches about the story being foalcon.
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I hate people like that so much, like come on, really? did you expect it to be a joke? those people irritate me to the very core
Man I swear I listen to the most out of place music when I read stories, this was great, Sunny x Argyle is so based, love it
Jesus Christ that ending! Went all lion king on us