It has been three months since the assassination attempt of Shining Armor and Princess Cadance. Silent Wind has been much better ever since he's been with his Marefriend, Twilight Sparkle. But one day, he is called to The Kingdom of Canterlot to talk to Princess Celestia.
Little do they know, they have come on the right time to talk to The Leader of the Silentblades. For he comes to Canterlot for a certain Stallion, Silent Wind.
Old and New allies are made, Friends die, Old Friends are united and Old Enemies return.
What will be the fate of Equestria?
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Assassin's Tears I is Highly recommended to read first before this.
Assassin's Tears III is out, find it here.
Chapters (21)
hmmmm not bad
DIS GUN BE GUD
Other than grammer mistakes this is really good. I suggest you reread and/or have somebody else read your future chapters before you post them.
1281571 What kind of grammer errors? explain.
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not bad i like it more
1282672 Well, this could depend on where you're from, but where I'm from 'putted' is incorrect (it's put). There are multiple punctuation mistakes such as a common noun capitalized (unless that was purposeful for symbolic reasons) or a capitalization after a comma. This occurred more in your first book in this series but sometimes you would begin a sentence with past tense and then suddenly switch to present-tense (quote "As his uncle jump up to the booth to get Princess Cadance, both of the Royal Guards protecting Princess Cadance charged at him..."). There are other mistakes too that don't occur as often, but if you had somebody review your stories there probably would be barely any mistakes. Your spelling is fantastic and of course I LOVE the storyline or I wouldn't be reading, it's mainly grammar and punctuation. And again I'm just going off what I was taught, if what your doing is completely correct where you are then just ignore this. I don't mean to be critical or rude I'm really just trying to help.
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At end: SO MANY FUCKING WONDERS!
not bad, not bad at all
hm what`s this a assassin`s creed fanfic *reads more*
*reads more*
celestia walks on in the room and thinks thei are doing it
discord reanimates an army *reads more*
thei win the battle with star swirl *reads more*
1342273 Make sure to read AT1 first. :)
1344693 to late already done with the first
Cliff hangers....YOU MOTHER BUCKER I'LL KI-'gets hauled off in black van'
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SHIT JUST GOT EVEN REALER!
NOOO WHY THE OC....YOU MONSTER!!!!
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1392933 Uhhh.... what?
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I don't even know
You have no clue how bored i can get
boy if i was grammar nazi i would murder you for the "Now must should go" part
but besides the simply horrid grammar mistakes good story all in all
Awesome cliff hanger can't wait for the next part.
I've already got a feeling of how this is going to end against magicius
Sorry about the arm/foreleg mistake. I was a bit confused on what to pick but I'm still gonna do the arm word in AT2 and I think you'll understand I did kind of a mistake.
Chapter 18 will be delayed till Wednesday, sorry.
The final battle is about to begin
Cant wait for the ending (to quote Rainbow Dash) "It's gonna be SO AWESOME."
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Awesome can't wait to see how this turns out.
Final Chapter guys up next. It's gonna take at least 4 days or worst, a week.
1445566 the reason i havent commented is because im waiting for the story to finish before i read
Great ending, i loved this series a lot
Awesome ending.
Well done, I cannot wait to see what else you have up your sleve.
While I do like the concept, the grammar is terrible, so terrible that I can't stand to read the rest. I'm sorry, but just revise it so the grammar is correct. Best of luck to you sir
the grammar destruction starts in 3.........2...........1