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(Other tags: Cloudpuff, Thunder, and Zoom)

After showcasing a cloud device she built for an upcoming major event, Zipp gets into a small tussle with Cloudpuff that turns it on and reveals a hidden secret in the old station of Zephyr Heights.

This is my entry to the Generation 5 Bingo.

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I really enjoyed this story a lot especially when it gotten to the part with the murals from the long forgotten Canterlot Castle, the statue of Tirek, Chyraslis, Cozy Glow as well as the chained up statues of Grogar.

As she flew, she passed by a few electronic billboards that reminded Zipp why she was out and about to begin with, and that was a meeting between herself and two of her friends, Sunny and Izzy. The meeting was to discuss the one headliner that was practically the talk of the town for the last several months, and probably the biggest one the city has ever seen for generations, the marriage of her sister, Princess Pipp Petals, and Sheriff Hitch Trailblazer.

Aww I like that shipping so cute 😍

"These creatures seemed awfully important. This is the fourth display with them in it." Zipp remarked.

"They all look so happy though. Do you think they're still around somewhere? Think we could meet them and become friends with them too?" Izzy asked with a smile.

I really hope we do see these creatures again and wondering what happened to them

Well this is a pretty interesting story and I feel like something is going to happen sooner or later but it looks like with all the commotion that zipp and cloudpuff had with each other they found a secret passages way and it leads to a tunnel so Sunny zipp and Izzy and two of the guards went down there and what they found is a couple of The History of Equestria how Twilight and the others went through but they look like they found something not just only the legions of Doom but also grogar statue so I'm assuming that he was in prison down here along with them that is pretty concerning knowing that there are four villains are down there they need to make a proper protection before something goes wrong especially the wedding going on I feel like there should be a sequel to this one but other than that this was pretty good keep up the good work

I love the reveal of Grogar's statue and the final unsettling details - it sent chills down my spine, and this isn't even a horror fic, yet the scare is arguably done even better than some I've read. Well done.

Be careful around the statue with the three
You may release them with your magic if you aren't careful

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