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Examination of Twilight Sparkle

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johnthecollie #1 · Dec 27th, 2021 · · ·

Very stiff dialogue between the characters.

Bendy

Bendy #2 · Dec 27th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Socially awkward people tend to speak stiffly at any rate. Such as myself. But yeah, it's understandable.

yakopak

yakopak #3 · Dec 28th, 2021 · 1 · ·

I think you should take a writing class

Bendy

Bendy #4 · Dec 28th, 2021 · · ·

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That would probably be a good idea. Then again bendy is a slow learner, so it may be hopeless.

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