Rarity ,having no inspiration and no motivation for her work, strives for something new and enlightening, so why does she go to her best friend's home? What does Shy have to do with her 'fashion crisis'? Can Shy even help Rarity with such an issue? Does she even know what a fashion crisis is? And why bother wandering over to her cottage in the outskirts of town to begin with?
The prequel is not needed to read and understand this story. This story is only in the same universe as A Hard Day
The master piece that is the cover art was done by the amazing Starshinebeast
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This is in dire need of a proof-reader. The relentless grammatical errors make it difficult to read.
I must say, I wasn't expecting a ship between Rarity and Fluttershy when looking at your profile, but this fic is pretty good honestly! I could understand most of the emotions portrayed and I was a bit impressed with how you handled the two characters.
If there is one thing I would have done differently, it would have been the confession scene. It felt a bit jarring, but I suppose that also added to the unexpected evening as well. Either way, I really liked this fic, despite a couple of grammatical errors. It earns itself a place in my favorites and I would like it if I could! Unfortunately, I don't seem able to like it.
Keep up the good work!
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It's been a while since this has been shown any love... by me or anyone else
You’ve come across one big thing I struggle while writing: pay-offs. I'm semi-decent at setting up a plot and what it's going to lead up to. But when it comes to actually paying off all that, I struggle. And even if I do manage it, later on it feels jarring to me. I suppose more writing is gonna help smoothen that.
And yea, Rarity and Shy aren't the everyday ship are they? I do like to beleive their a bit underrated but that's just me. My opinion on them has changed, but I'd do consider them a note worthy paring.
One last thing, yea I did notice the grammar stuff, I really didn't want to go and re-do this again... also I didn't feel the want to go back and read this, it being my least favorite story I've written.
(Y’know that could very well be because it's about Rarity?)
Just cause I don't want to separately go to your user page: Thank You so very much for addding this to your favorites!
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I've helped proofread multiple friends' works, so I know how the process goes all too well. 
Can't wait to see more from you and if you ever need help from a fellow writer, just ask me for a hoof!
True, the payoff can often be hard to write, especially if you're feeling particularly uninspired. I've struggled with this as well, but I can often get through it with multiple readings and rewrites. And making my friends read it and tell me if everything flows together smoothly.
And yeah, Rarity and Fluttershy are indeed an uncommon shipping, but it was still a good reading! Even with the jarring confession, I liked the story all the same, so it's no problem. In my book, it deserves the favorite.
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I was worried I didn't get her correctly, or didn't get Shy right. I know how irritating it is when someone gets your favorite pony, or any one for that matter, out-of-character, to a really evident extent (with no reasonings) So I didn't want that feel coming from this, or any of my stories
Thanks! I'll keep it mind. I probably will be needing the help sometime in the future
Again, I'm really glad you liked it! I really wasn't sure about this. Like I mentioned, writing for these two is... not something I do on a regular basis, Rares, being my least favorite, and to me the hardest to write for, its not everyday I think "Hmmm maybe I'll start a new Rarity-cantic story"
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No problem! If you ever need any help proofreading anything or need feedback on a story, feel free to DM me! I really like your work so far, so I wouldn't mind.
And trust me, I actually feel like you got Rarity pretty much on point. I really liked the story and sometimes it can help to step out of your comfort zone and write characters you don't typically write about~ It's also fun to write about those characters with possibly different personalities in an alternate universe. But yeah! This fic was definitely a nice one to read~
P.S. Notify me when a new story comes out please~