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DIO Brando


"Hurry up and fetch me my leg!"

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I wonder by what stroke of luck allowed this to come through my feed just minutes after it was posted. I am very curious as to where this will go.

Insant change of behavior following a tra sformation? Yeah, thats not good.

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There is more to the Empire's birth than may meet the eye. :raritywink:

That was amazing let's go:rainbowdetermined2:

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I'm glad you liked it! I'm really enjoying this too, so I wrote another chapter. I'm hoping I didn't miss any grammatical errors, but I try not to make them the first-go-round. :twilightblush:

I'll admit I wasn't expecting an update so soon. Things are starting to get interesting.

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I'm debating on writing the second one now, or getting started on composing music for it, which I plan to do as well because I need something to write to. Hard to write "soundtrack" genre when there's no "soundtrack" to be made :raritycry:

I wasn't expecting another chapter but this chapter💯

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I'll be right back on it tomorrow, I've got a lot of ideas for this and I'm excited to see how they'll play out. Best part about not planning a story is that you get to experience something similar to the reader!

But I appreciate these comments so much. I'll try my best to keep up an entertaining read.

Wasn't expecting an update this quick. Loving it thus far. Can't wait to see how shim sham plays into things

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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can believe you'd say that right after getting me with a finger circle in the profile pic, what a monster :raritydespair:

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

And once again I am surprised by another chapter. I was wondering when Shimmer would make her appearance. You had me curious with the Prologue, but its safe to say I am hooked.

Daybreaker should cast a spell to slowly corrupt Sunset Shimmer over time

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Wonder what's gonna happen to shimmy, anyway, still curious to starlight character in this story and hope Luna commits a heated gaming moment on the griffins, because out of the nations thus far the griffons are at least for me, the absolute worst.

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

What's the EAW universe?

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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Equestria At War. I played the mod for HoI4 and really enjoyed it, but this is completely separate from that. For instance: in this story, Fluttershy is not a nuclear scientist.

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Wait you can make fluttershy a nuclear scientist in rqurstria at war? I haven't played it in like 2 years did they add zebrica yet?

This is a good chapter😌

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I don't think so, I usually become Daybreaker and steamroll the entire world until the Gryphons tear me apart.

And yes, as long as your politics stay Harmonist/Traditionalist, Fluttershy can be employed in a government position after the Magi-nuclear power National Focus to speed up Nuclear research. Gotta have those nukes. :pinkiesmile:

Her friends would be arriving at any point in time, so she had to be quick to prepare the meeting table. The meeting was not scheduled for another thirty minutes, but her friends were rather eager to see her at any given time.

This just seemed a little redundant to me, but otherwise I'm liking the story so far.

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How tf did you manage to die to the griffins no offense tho, wait which one are you talking about last time I checked there's like 98 griffin empires
I fuck around as stalliongrad and naval invade and air invade them for shits and giggles and win

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Well you see, the Griffonian Empire gets very big, and if they don't get big, then the Aquelian republic does. I also try to conquer the entire world, so maybe I'm a little ambitious-

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Yeah, I see what you mean, I'll get it fixed in a bit

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Bro, you gotta understand, if you aren't killing the major powers 2 seconds into the game with shifted out 12 width divisions then midway into the war switch to 10 width to steam roll and end the war you're just not playing the game right

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I still don't know how to properly establish air superiority to be honest LOL

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I see the problem, how many hours do you have in hoi4?

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Well, given I play through a game in a single sitting on max speed while pausing to set stuff, probably around 40 or 60, but Idk and I haven't in a short while.

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

"Ah, yes, this is where things will become dangerously adventurous—but I am certain you are up to the task," Adiaíretos started, "Sunset Shimmer is confined within the Ninth Canterlot Tower in a room shielded by Solar Magic, the same kind of ancient magic that Empress Daybreaker uses to raise the sun. Sunset Shimmer is the key to preserving the Harmonious Constant. You will not be able to penetrate the shield with your own magic, so you will need this."

I really hope you go with daydream shimmer having a final showdown with the fallen twilight; and Luna fighting her sister. The parallels to the first eqg movie and the first episode would be really great writing. Keep it up.

Shimx glim is a great ship, I swear to God if you end this with a bad end with them dieing to daybreaker im gonna do something. Don't know what yet. But I will tho trust me bro. Seriously though this is great, and the buildup to the climax is great. Good vs total evil in daybreaker and sunrise sparkle. Wonder if in the end twilight will return for a short moment and beg for release of death or something along those lines

Also really hope the nightmare moon thing backfires spectacularly on the griffons, I do take back what I said of me hating them more than daybreaker but still I do hate them alot

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BTW a bit late reply to this wanna play equestria at war sometime?

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I want to, but my internet is so dogshite it's hard to manage. Tried a hotspot, but my phone isn't built for it's own fucking hotspot.

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Ah well do you have discord or something so we could talk for a bit, I can Screensaver while playing hoi or smth

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I have a sever actually
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Based, also fun fact if you didn't know idk if it was April fools or smth but the devs of kaiserreich and equestria at war said the mirror portal leads to kiassereich universe lmao

awesome chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

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if i had a dollar for every time you copy-pasted this comment, id have enough money to replace your broken CTRL and V keys.

Good stuff. Very based i hated that griffin king and the spy, very good. Hope Luna gets reformed cause she arleast seems to be the better of the two sisters rn, though you will dehumanizing her in the next chapter or the other, who knows. Can't wait to see sunrise and celestia get blasted to kingdom come by sunny and glimmy

"Why rot in this cell, when you could turn to the Empire?" Sunrise asked, "what more would you want now than the life of luxury you were once afforded, and more under the Empire?"

Hey, at least his fate won't be like Winston's in the book '1984'.

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