When it comes to the Dazzlings, Sonata Dusk and Aria Blaze are often butting each other's heads. Whether it's because of Sonata's silly questions or Aria wanting to start it, folks wonder why they get in each other's heads so often. And now Adagio finds herself putting that question to the test. But in order for this to work: The two girls find themselves having to make a switch. Which may not be the best idea.
*Part of the Siren AU Continuity*
(Cursed) Cover Art by The Sleepless Beholder
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Is this a rewrite? 'Cause I swear this was released before.
10891564 Due to it not being qualified for the contest from before, I have to remove it. There were other reasons but I'm omitting from say why
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Ok
There are some words that needed to be in hyphen, but other than that It's a sweet lil' story.
10892524 Could you point then out please? And I'm glad you enjoyed it
Why do I smell burnt toast?
10892578 Wouldn't be the weirdest thing
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Question first, what writing program do you use? or any website in the fact
10893320 Are you asking what I typed it on? Because the answer is Google docs if so.
Yo, If this similar to Disney's Freaky Friday I'm down
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I love the original & I haven't seen the remake in years but that's still a classic none the less.
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Well, you can use other websites to check your hyphens and redundancy, just copy & paste " websites for checking grammar ". Also, I recommend Grammarly downloaded because that is what I mainly downloaded, sure, there are other softwares, and using Grammarly is more of a convenience contrary to spelling checking and diverse words. You read your own story so you can be sure.
Also, WordWeb is your best friend because it's small and convenient to hotkey.
So, if you remember, I said I was going to share my thoughts on this story.
You have consistent verb tense problems. All of the narrative sections are in present tense, and all of the dialogue is in past tense. If you want the entire story to be in present tense, you should change the dialogue tags. (Use says instead of said, mutters instead of muttered, etc.)
The interactions between all three of the Sirens were funny. And Adagio is certainly the type to enjoy the chaos.
The section with Sonata and Aria pretending to be each other could have been very confusing, but since you included the quotation marks whenever they were acting, it wasn’t too bad.
Anon only plays a minor role, but seeing as this story in a series, the short appearance is appropriate.
You didn’t really have much “reunion” in the story. Anon coming home could be a part of that, but it wasn’t the focus of the story.
10899440 Well, yes. The point was for Aria and Sonata after all. Anon appearing at the end was just for giggles. Tbh, I almost forgot about that
A sweet addition to the 'Siren AU' and these sirens offer some hilarious banter.
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That explains it, I was wondering why it was no where to be found in my favorites
You could of just drawed straws to see who where's who's clothes.
Now they look the picture.
Uh oh, this isn't good.
Awkward moment.
They sure took this too far.
I'd hate to be him right now he has to deal with that.
This is what happens when you judge a book by it's cover. I didn't want to read it because of the 'cursed cover'. But I'm so glad I decided to read it. This is hilarious! Well done (the scary thing is that I read this during school)!
10988412 Well, I did say it would be cursed so I don't blame you