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MisterEdd


Hello. I'm MisterEdd and a horse is a horse of course of course.

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Looks great! Upvote now, read and comment after work.

I surprisly want the time Thunderlane and Flutter play the "rape" game

Finally read it! I love it, thank you so much!

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Thank you! That means a lot coming from you.

Huh. My first guess was that Luna owed Fluttershy a favor and this was a shared dream. This works as well, and is a sign of just how much Fluttershy's friends approve of the pairing. Very nice stuff.

Another fine addition to the collection

Technically exhibitionism, but how would you tell if you only read the sex? It read like once they got started, they completely forgot about the point of it all, and then we get only a couple mentions of how the crowd was reacting. Then tie it all up with a chaos magic hand-wave, which I don't think passes at all to make it consensual voyeurism.

I think this really needed more introspection to pass as a kink experiment. Getting wrapped up in the act and forgetting you have an audience would have been fine provided there's some more reaction afterwards...

Still, not bad, cute character portrayal, just could've been a lot more interesting

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