I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
Word of Mario’s heroic deeds reached Equestria, now he is headed to Equestria for a vacation via invite but King Olly takes over Equestria by folding it into his own origami vision, now Mario teams up with Olivia and Spike to save Equestria. Will they be able to save Equestria or will Equestria be refolded? Find out on My Little Origami King.
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Mind if I make a suggestion?
What if Mario, Olivia and Spike found Starlight Glimmer in the forest still flat as paper, and the three (excluding Olivia) fight the Mane 6 one by one, but Starlight somehow manages to get them back to their papery selves, then the rescued ponies join them on their journey?
Suggested fight order:
You could assign one of the MLP villains with the Legion of Stationary. Under threat from King Olly of obey his loyal legion or get turned into Origami Troops. Just a suggestion or a though
This is a pretty interesting crossover.
Wonder what Spike will get to do?
Though shouldn't Luna be able to resist the mind-control? Her mind should be stronger due to how she is guardian of dreams and related to mind stuff.
Its really disappointing not only she is defeated and is a massive failure again but is also humiliated by being mind-controlled there..
If only some are immune to it, then why wasn't Luna immune to it?
Given her mind should be stronger and she is attributed with darkness there.
It makes even more embarrassing she fell to the mind-control too.
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If it makes you feel better some of our main characters like Mario and Chrysalis are immune but I’m not gonna lie, I didn’t think about Luna’s dream powers, I honestly needed a way for Olly to overpower the princesses so I used mind control as an excuse.
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That seriously doesn't make it ok.
Luna's dream powers would have made her mind strong enough.
And having her be mind-controlled is not only humiliating her but doing her character so dirty here and poorly handling here.
Sorry if I seem harsh, I am pretty upset with what happened to Luna but I think at the moment something else set me off to make me feel more agitated than I should at the moment. Sorry..
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It’s okay I’m not mad. On the plus side my rewrite of My Little Total Drama has a new chapter I hope you check it out.
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Which chapter actually?
Still though.. the problem about Luna is still there..
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Basically from Party Pooped to the rest of the chapters currently there.