Did he learn about the duel spirits in his deck?

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Maybe. I was planning on doing a flashback chapter on how he met the Dragonmaids and died, but I felt there wasn't enough interest in this story. Perhaps I'll do it in the anthology

So is this the end or…..?

(nods) that was a satisfying conclusion: only minor nitpick is that we didn't get to see Hunter and Breaburn's rematch; side note: here's hoping that Moondancer and Hunter take good care of Starry Fields 🙂

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Of this story. As I said in my notes, there will be an anthology coming soon and maybe another team duel story

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I decided to leave that for everyone's imagination. Perhaps in the anthology we'll find out

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(nods) okay then; thanks for clearing that up... 🙂

huh, kitchen dragonmaid for a cover image. interesting choice.

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I think I finally figure it out

Star Chart is really:

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A very nice end to the story. Interesting to see Hunter have a sister at the end. He'll be a much better guardian for her than their shitty parents who bailed yet again.

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You have no idea how close this ending came to being something completely different.

Originally, I had thought to make it so that Hunter was being allowed to visit his dad in jail. Only, when his dad saw him, he would think Hunter was Chaser. Then things would just go quietly downhill from there

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Good thing you went with this instead.

Honestly, Chaser probably deserved what he got.

It was then that Chaser’s heart, if he still had one in this form, sank in an ocean of terror as the thing appeared next to one of the nearby mountains. This monster was a thing that not even Lovecraft could dream of! It was like a human, several bits, a dragon, and something else had all been thrown in a blender which it then merged with! As it walked, the mountain jumped out of its way, something it did often. When it didn’t, the mountain would just crumble away into dust. This thing, it was in the solid earth moving like it was walking through water. Its eyes were like searchlights, the beams scanning for its next prey.

Wait a minute, is that…the Equestria Girls version of Discord…?

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No. That is Lucifer Morningstar. The devil

11875648 Ah, my mistake