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I'm just someone who isn't much of a talker, but does like to share several ideas I've thought of.

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Sandbar and Ocellus are summoned for a mission by the map. This one is for two ponies in Canterlot, or rather three. Fancypants and Fleur appear to have a surprise guest, a very young one. The two appear to have disagreements on how their guest shall be handled, so the students have to help them find a solution and fast.

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“Have you guys also… you know… picked up on the stereotypes?” Smolder asked. This confused her friends a little bit. “I mean, they've got stereotypes for us. Greedy dragons, tricky griffons, big dumb yaks…”

Yeah that's always going to be a big problem especially after I'm hearing this so many times

“We all have,” Ocellus noted. “That’s when we tried to help Silverstream.” This made Silverstream feel uncomfortable. “Though, you and I went there twice for a friendship mission.”

Nice call back of your two stories which they are pretty good

"Why on earth do they have a foal?" a stallion questioned, "Let alone an earth pony." Fancypants didn't like rumors that were forming about him, Fleur, and Hazy. He didn't say too much until they made it back home.

Why don't you just mind your own dang business here jerks 😡

"Sandbar, have you noticed a pattern from the last three missions?" Ocellus asked. "Think about it. First, Yona and Silverstream go help Terry with Iron Will becoming his step-dad, next Gallus and Smolder help Peter getting adopted into his new family, and then we helped Fancypnts and Fleur with a blind foal that was just thrust upon them."

Yeah that is a pretty interesting pattern here it looks like either the map or the tree of Harmony wanted to help not just about the Friendship but also fixing family issues as well

Also, this story was originally supposed to be about Capper and Captain Celaeno. However, since the season 10 comics started coming out, I had to change plans.

Yeah especially we got the chance to see Zecora home land and capper meeting up with his old Pals from his homeland as well and apparently there's different types of Diamond Dogs Out There and Captain Celaeno and her team will be coming up soon probably get the chance to see more creatures so many possibilities in this one and I'm actually pretty excited to read those comics 😀

Okay so it looks like we have another friendship map story so I looks like the map called Sandbar and Ocellus for this mission and heading to Canterlot so they were trying to find the problem until Sandbar so fancy pants and apparently he doesn't look too hot right now and we found out why apparently him and Fleur got a kid but what they found out that this kid was abanded by his parents and another thing this kid is blind so that would make things kind of difficult for fancy pants and Fleur de Lis but it looks like sandbar and Ocellus knows how to help the situation especially they got younger siblings of their own as well basically getting out for the baby and everything but the kid can be a little challenging since he can't see they need to prepare for is Future and it's a good thing they went to the school to prepare for that but it looks like Fleur is having some doubts about this whole situation but they want to reassure her nothing is never easy when it comes to taking care of a kid but somehow it will work out in the end and they don't have to do it alone and it is pretty interesting that throughout the friendship Mission it is about family I wonder if there's some connection to those particular families I guess that's another time for another story but this was a pretty good short story keep up the good work you guys

Aww, this was a very sweet story! I loved it, keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

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