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Please make a sequel please!
Yup, thats AI written.
I wondered why this story sounded so familiar, then I remembered this:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/438661/lulu-dolls
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I probably will though idk how long it'll before I finish it. Im trying to improve my writing a lot because I the level of writing I did here was middle school level. XD
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The promp I did before writing this was AI written...this was written by me using the AI written version as an outline. I'm just not a very good writer. It's something I'mtrying to improve on.
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Yup i always liked that story and it made me want to try to make something similar but a little more extreme with different kinks. Which is why i credited it in the summary.
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Ok
Ohh please do make a sequel of Luna and the rest of Equestria fate, in fact please make stories of the rest of mane six, starlight, sunset and even celestia sharing the same fate and possibly do a story of celestia doing a victory orgy with the girls as the main attraction for her hive. XD
This is... surprisingly good! While I'm not the biggest fan of dark fics or the implications you went with I definitely enjoyed this.
Grammatical errors aside I had no idea ai could make some believable scenario. I would definitely be interested if you wrote more. (Especially if it would be Chrissy tricking the Mane 6!
) 
Constructive Critisizem:
Well..first off, I'd want to commission you for seeing a story of Chrysalis doing exactly what she planned...Taking Luna's place and going after Celestia..... No one ever does stories like that...
I also would show some kind of Epilogue...sew up the end...Luna a few weeks later, now all air..maybe Sold yo Shining Armor....or maybe Gallus Griffin... and see hos she is used....
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). Only the first chapter is out which is Twilight. I've started writing the next chapter to that one but I've been super busy lately and had a bit of writers block so idk when I'll finish it. I have a general idea for a 3rd story that i want to do that will be a sequel to these 2 stories where now that Chrysalis has the mane 6, Luna, and the other possible risky ponies so it's time to use Luna's identity to get to Celestia. again i have the general idea but i haven't really thought out the details and the few i have i don't want to spoil. After that whole ark is done maybe I'll do a side stories about other characters from the show that Chrysalis captures or transforms. Thank you for the interest though.
This was the first story I've ever written so I'm not ganna take commissions since I'm not very good and I have a super short attention span so I don't want to take money to write a story that idk if I'd finish it. I made a prequel where Chrysalis and her associates doll the mane 6 and i might extend it to a couple other characters like starlight, Trixie, etc(Chrysalis has extended her list of targets this time to be thorough
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Well:
It is a good thing I am not requesting a commission :)
No I just wanted to complement you, but I would point out.... if you are going to continue the story, I would encourage you to not only show the plight of the other ponies (Such as Luna) but also show a bit how their plight has aided Chrysalis' plan. (Changelings enjoying the love of other ponies that love the pony's turned into sex dolls, as well as the sex dolls actually serving their purpose?)
Too many authors, I feel, do the transformation and then forget the results :)
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Seriously, I'd love to see a detailed description of Rarity or Rainbow getting dolled.