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Argonaut44


I unexpect the expected

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In the midst of a tumultuous conflict in Equestria, two soldiers, an eager-hearted pegasus and a begrudged, formerly-demoted unicorn, embark on a mission to save the lives of a good few thousand ponies, and possibly even Equestria itself.
~ Premise inspired by '1917' ~
~ Vector in Thumbnail Made By Pirill-Poveniy on Deviantart ~


Chapters (8)
Comments ( 6 )

a formerly-demoted unicorn

OK, but what's her personality like?

Why does the pony on the right remind me of Lightning Dust

Why did you make the chapters so long?

Wow, it was a very good and strong story with a great plot, which, although it repeated the plot of the film in places, still looked pretty good. Thank you for the new experience from fanfic and for the old experience from film! :fluttercry:

I found the story very enjoyable. You had me quite hooked from start to finish. Some things I liked more than others, for instance would have prefered less fighting overall because I found those the least interesting parts. And the kill count perhaps got a bit ridiculous which takes away some of the tension, but the story was definitely exciting. Would have also prefered a lenghty epilogue to the conflict (unless of course there is a sequel planned). But I’m also not displeased with where it ended. Good work, overall.

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