Matthew- no, that name has been dead to him for years, Jason returns to Equestria to check up on a world that he and many had held dear. A world that Lauren Faust has created. The world… of Equestria, a training ground for many of the new generation of world builders
The story has a good potential.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Need moooore
This is great!
Its a great Idea and nicely excited, great job!!! I like the story so far I hope you do make more of this fic in the future.
More chapters are on the way, it’s just taking me a bit to write all my ideas in to actual chapters
I am trying to ease back into writing this story, so chapters might once again be on the short side
Can't wait for next chapter
Is this a sequel?
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Hey just take your time and do your thing; also (this is just me throwing my thoughts around but) if you do or don't plan on taking another break and you end up with Ideas, try to write them down in a notebook for the future. (Remember this is just me throwing my thoughts around; so you can just ignore it.)
P.S. Welcome back and great job.
It's alright I just started reading and I'm already enthralled if you need time to think through your story take that time
things are falling into place finally
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That's always nice to hear. I'm glad things are starting to work out
I just found this FF here randomly and just read through the chapters quickly...MATTHEW AND PINKIE EH? ADHD BUDDIES AND PILLOW FORT RULERS + MATTHEW BUILDS A NEW CITY WHERE THE EVERFREE FOREST WAS? YESSSSSSS
but seriously this was premium!
In my opinion I think Pinkie Pie puts the H in ADHD
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Top hat
So! here we are! the re-write has begun, and the story will be able to push forward. thank you all for your patience