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General Alduin


Joined the site just when the show ended. Funny how things work.

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10,000 years ago, Humanity charted the stars and created an empire to survive the ages. They created a society of such power and might, they thought nothing would dare stand against them.

They were wrong.

The Hydra, a race wholly dedicated to the annihilation of Mankind, plunged the fledgling empire into cataclysmic war. For 50 years Humanity fought, but ultimately they lost.

On the eve of humanity’s destruction, 10 humans were interred in cryogenic sleep and sent to a planet Humanity had terraformed: Eques.

For 10,000 years the humans slept, only to awaken In a universe they no longer recognized, on a world full of many multitudes of creatures from myth and legend.

However, something stirs in the darkness. Something long thought to have been defeated, and should the Humans fail, it will plunge all of Eques into darkness.


A/N: hey everyone, I’ve decided to try writing my second story on the platform.

Now this one has a weird background to it: back when the FIM was in its second or third season, I was trying to find a fanfic about the return of Discord. Instead, I found a rather unique HIE fic. It was nothing amazing; the writing was ameuterish and the story was a bit cliched and predictable, but for some reason I loved it.

I built a whole world out of it, tried to imagine what would happen next, and even made some of my own worldbuilding for it.

Right before it’s last chapter was to be published, the author decided he was going to revise the whole story. He did, but it stopped updating before the halfway point and he took it down from Fanfiction.net a year ago. This greatly disappointed me.

However, I’ve read the fic so many times I basically have it memorized and saved the revised version, and since I have way too much free time on my hands, I decided to rewrite it and post it on the platform.

I like to to think of it as a type of recursive fan fiction, and give credit of the story and eight of the human characters to Hawkeye 35 (who also wrote the story COLTS)

Also, bear with me regarding the story image. There wasn’t much that would fit for my incredibly specific story so I had to settle on a sci fi soldier.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 36 )

That guy almost looks like Firefly from the Batman Arkham Games. Or a Pyro soldier from a unknown Sci-Fi game.

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Son of a bitch, it does look like Firefly. I am so changing that later.

The fact that this is a rewrite and improvment of an older fic that is now gone, has me really excited. Of course I haven't read the original, I wasn't part of the fandom back then, so I can't compare them.

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Why does it make you excited? I thought it was a dumb idea and i could get sued by the author somehow, but I did it anyway.

Though I am glad that you’re interested.

Typo detected in Summary: 'annihalation'; properly spelled, 'annihilation'.

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The reason why I'm excited is because this is something I feel more people should do, borrow old idéas of stories that have been abandoned, and improve or expand them so that others can enjoy them. This is a great idéa!

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Huh, well, if you say so. I do plan on actually finishing the story (some day) and maybe going a bit beyond that.

I like the inclusion of Twilight’s eqg canon as it will certainly make things more interesting than others I’ve seen. I’ll keep an eye on this one.

Certified good shit
Im going to wait for more

That was good bro can't wait for next chapter I'm looking forward for you take the story💯💯💯

Very good start to the story, I see a future for this, can you add the Young 6 in the next chapter?

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Next chapter? No unfortunately, but I do plan on including them at some point, though the story won't focus much on them. Maybe in a potential sequel/spinoff?

I remember this original story and the rewrite done.

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Holy shit really? I didn't think I'd come across someone who actually read the original fic, it was really obscure.

Shut up and take my like and follow!! Seriously though I'm looking forward to more this is a good start to a story.

Certified bing chilling
You deserve a +10000000 social credIt

Now I'm really interested and curious as to how thing will play out. Keep going! :pinkiehappy:

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Unauthorized social credit transfer. Earth citizenship has been revoked, Citizen 2187-B will be moved to Luna for transfer.

Which season would this take place by then?

After the series ended but without Celestia and Luna stepping down, the distant finale with Luster Dawn doesn’t happen either.

I'm really curious to were this is going, since I didn't read the original, I´ve no clue. :applejackunsure:
When we say that the Earth blew up, are we talking the core being destroyed or the surface of the planet being set on fire? Don't answer, I don't want to be spoiled, it's just fun to speculate.

Good start. I'm looking forward to more and yes it's more believable. Liked and followed

“Damn, that was a big explosion.” Kowalski remarked as he surveyed the destruction and Adrian’s subsequent slaughter of the remaining Hydra. Suddenly a round deflected off his helmet. “Gówno!”

Hmmm Gówno
I see Poland guy

Keep it up

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Slované jsou dohromady silní bratře. Jo a taky pozor na jazyk, jsou tu děti.
No I am not going to translate that, use Google.

I'm sorry, when will the sequel?

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I mean, first I need to finish this story before I think about a sequal

I mean when is the next chapter

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No idea, I have the next chapter scheduled as the twelfth thing for me to write and my writing and publishing speed is very erratic.

No way Firebreak from BO3?!

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I'm assuming you're talkng about the picture.

Idk, I just found a random Sci fi soldier picture and used it for the story image

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