A Fiery Angel...
I bought dual flaming katanas that turned me into a Fiery Angel that can only remember MLP:fim, said Fiery Angel as an OC named Rubae, and buying said katanas from a weird Merchant. Seriously, how stupid was I before that!?
Well, at least I woke up in a fireball I noticed was crashing down into the Everfree forest.
No wait, that was an even worse part!
Someone, please tell me I'll get at least something good out of this
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Not bad for a first chapter. I liked it
Never on the estimated Spike
Not bad! Great work!
Hope the next chapter comes soon
Love it
Twilight face was like
Now you have my interrrrrest
;)
I gotta say thanks for the positive feedback
I wish you the best of luck for your story. Be wary if you decide to cross-over with other Displaced. The wrong character, at the wrong time, in the wrong way, can badly derail the plot.
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thanks for the feedback although I probably won't, even if I prepare myself for it by getting a token I'd probably only do so if someone else reaches out to me
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The best way to do it, is either you do it after your main story is finished, or only have the cross-overs in their worlds, but don't bother including the details as part of the chapters except brief mentions.
Feel free to bounce ideas off me.
Hope the next chapter will be soon
The worst thing about reading unfinished stuff like this is that you always get to the chapter that is just posted finish it and then immediately realize ah I can't read on because it's not done. But srysly tho great job I can't wait to see where this goes
I'm sorry the next chapter has been taking so long, but I'm having a slight case of writer's block, and what I do get on paper feels rushed. If you do want another chapter with the next one in return just say the word and I'll try to do what I can.
its alive
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Been waiting so long worth it