• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2012
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Heesman


Honest, serious, funny, oblivious. Me in a nut-shell.

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HMB

Awesome story right here.

AND SHE GOT PREGNANT! and thats why dinky has only one parent he dodged the responsibility

1230768
Thank you. It warms a lot to finally hear some feedback on this fic :pinkiesmile:

1231949
Well, I'll leave that open for individual interpretation. :pinkiesmile:

Wow i really like this story hope you make more stories that are this awsome.:rainbowdetermined2:

1269417
Yeah, after 3 months of work, it turned out very good. :ajsmug:

Too bad thought that I couldn't pull of the romance scene as good as in ''Naughty Intentions'' :ajsleepy:
My laziness always gets the better of me :ajbemused:

Good story so far. But just a little nitpick about something.

Derpy tilted her head, looking at the strange creature that for the second time now helped her without her ever asking.

but earlier she clearly said

- SHINE! HELP!

just something I noticed was all. Doesn't detract from the story all that much but it did break the flow for me just a bit.

7203225 Hm. Didn't think of that one. Good eye there. :twilightsmile:

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