"The clever are not so much looking for loneliness as they avoid the fuss created by fools." - Arthur Schopenhauer
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That was fun.
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Thanks and no problem.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Pretty good story and very well written, only a few knitpicks, but it's still a good story.
It should be "what a foolish girl you are." If you're has to be there in needs to be written like this "you're such a foolish girl"
This needs to be "oh how right you are." But if you're needs to be in there it can be written as "oh how you're right."
This needs to be "aha, there you are." Or it could be written as "aha you're right there."
I really did enjoy the story and apologize if I seem to critical.
I wish I can give this story a like so I'll put it here. 👍🏼
It’s not my fetish so I might be off the mark, but this feels poorly written. Everything changes so quickly and so often it’s hard to tell what’s going on at any given time.
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I'll keep that in mind, thank you. And i kept ratings off on purpose. Because all people ever do is abuse it by overusing it.
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Umm... you're aware that there was a warning for that, right? If the fetish disgusted you, you honestly didn't have to read it.
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Welcome.
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Thanks
10633290
Sorry, I deliberately disabled the ratings on my more... naughty stories because of the trolls and shamers that divebomb my work with unnecessary comments and dislikes. It's nothing personal.
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I know. I understand.
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Again, really sorry about that and thanks for understanding.
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Welcome.
Your story is shit 😏
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Indeed. You certainly don't mince your words, do you?