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Galar Ponyta #1 · Dec 13th, 2020 · 4 · · 5 Months Later ·

So... correct me if im wrong... but.... she egged shining on to impregnate Sweetie bell, and shes now gonna egg him on to knock up flurry heart.... but..... she snuffed out twilight and his foal......... that about sums up her logic right? Kinda... off putting and weird not gonna lie.

Its a good story dont get me wrong... just cadances logic behind her actions toward twilight doesnt make much sense...

Nauvis

Nauvis #2 · Dec 13th, 2020 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

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She stopped twilight from getting pregnant because she's kind of a big important mare. And a foal would probably get in the way of that/draw a lot more attention than they could get away with. But a "random filly", noone's going to link that back to them. Plus it's more kinky that way.

In other words, kink logic applies

Galar Ponyta #3 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 4 · · 5 Months Later ·

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Except they are gonna be breeding with Flurry next which would again cause alot of problems by the logic ya gave xD

Nauvis

Nauvis #4 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 2 · · 5 Months Later ·

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I mean... Uh. Something something flurry deserves it.

Who knows, maybe I'll come up with some retroactive justification for it in an hour or two. Cadance was more meant to be the "devil on the shoulder" character rather than anything more consistent anyhow

PiMan

PiMan #5 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 2 · · 5 Months Later ·

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Flurry is definitely too young at this point, so your excuse for Twilight is intact. If Sweetie was 12/13, then Flurry can't be much older than how we've seen her in canon.

Nauvis

Nauvis #6 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 3 · 2 · 5 Months Later ·

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See, there we go. There's the justification I meant all along, totally. And nobody can prove otherwise.

Thepervertedeye

Thepervertedeye #7 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 7 · · A Shining Belle ·

“And you didn’t even wear contraceptives.” Cadance dramatically put her hooves to her mouth, “Thank goodness someone else was there to snuff that life-to-be out of her~”

so candance gave twi a abortion? that needs a story

Novapony

Novapony #8 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 2 · · 5 Months Later ·

Ayy, that cover art is a commission of mine. I look forward to reading this.

Nauvis

Nauvis #9 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

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When you put it like that, I guess you're right. That could make for a pretty decent ficlet
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Oh yeah, now that you mention it the uploader shares your account name. What a small world

Thepervertedeye

Thepervertedeye #10 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 2 · · 5 Months Later ·

well that was a strange read. very short but good

Mpony1

Mpony1 #11 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

I really assumed this story took place in the same universe as the first 2 stories where Shining already fuck Flurryheart twice.

They would be one perverted fuck family if that was the case. Unless they already are

Regidar

Regidar #12 · Dec 14th, 2020 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

Hey, my boyfriend drew that picture!

Regidar

Regidar #13 · Dec 17th, 2020 · · · 5 Months Later ·

Regidar

Regidar #14 · Dec 17th, 2020 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

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can do!
edit: he says thank you

AppleCider120 #15 · Jan 1st, 2021 · 4 · · A Shining Belle ·

Would be interesting to see this with flurry, heh.

Kichi

Kichi #16 · Feb 16th, 2021 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

Are you going to make a sequel with Flurry or the other Crusaders?

Sir Starshine #17 · Mar 21st, 2021 · 1 · · A Shining Belle ·

Well the non-con aspect isn’t my thing (and I overlooked it when reading the description), but it’s a good story, and still hot.

Sir Starshine #18 · Mar 21st, 2021 · 1 · · 5 Months Later ·

Looks like Twilie’s gonna be an aunt again. And have a couple more sisters-in-law.

PLAYBRONY #19 · Sep 2nd, 2022 · 2 · · A Shining Belle ·

Fantastic work, I’d love to see a sequel with Flurry. ^-^

Luckyfanisaac #20 · January 16th · · · A Shining Belle ·

“And that’s when I said, ‘good lord you look like you dressed yourself this morning’ and let me tell you she was not happy about that one.(——”
“Of course Princess, apologies for taking up your time.(——”
And with that, he vanished. Hopefully to never be seen again. Shining looked back towards Cadance who had a knowing smile on her face. She pressed herself against him, wrapping a wing around his torso. “You look like you need a break.(——”
“Some wine sounds lovely right about now.(——” A confirmation, “What type have you looked out?”
For a moment Cadance just giggled, a sound that was both soothing and unnerving, “I’ve already looked out a bottle of Pinot Noir, just for the two of us.(——”
Guess I just have to wait and see.(——
He looked back her way and put on a smile for the crowd, “Then I’ll look forward to a nice relaxing evening with you.(——”
She returned the smile, giving one last wing-hug before separating off into the crowd.
Just one hour and fifty two minutes left, I can last.(——
Cadance was stood right next to the door, clearly having been waiting for him, she slowly shook her head. “You’ll wake her.(——” she whispered.(——
You said that there’d be a mare here to have some fun with.(——”
He looked back at the filly, then back at Cadance,
Cadance softly giggled, “Yes~ You figured it out.(——”
“...You’re going to need to explain.(——”
“Even if she won’t remember anything, it’s still wrong.(——”
A tight hole like that would be no match for such a hung stud.(——”

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