So... correct me if im wrong... but.... she egged shining on to impregnate Sweetie bell, and shes now gonna egg him on to knock up flurry heart.... but..... she snuffed out twilight and his foal......... that about sums up her logic right? Kinda... off putting and weird not gonna lie.

Its a good story dont get me wrong... just cadances logic behind her actions toward twilight doesnt make much sense...

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She stopped twilight from getting pregnant because she's kind of a big important mare. And a foal would probably get in the way of that/draw a lot more attention than they could get away with. But a "random filly", noone's going to link that back to them. Plus it's more kinky that way.

In other words, kink logic applies

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Except they are gonna be breeding with Flurry next which would again cause alot of problems by the logic ya gave xD

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I mean... Uh. Something something flurry deserves it.

Who knows, maybe I'll come up with some retroactive justification for it in an hour or two. Cadance was more meant to be the "devil on the shoulder" character rather than anything more consistent anyhow

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Flurry is definitely too young at this point, so your excuse for Twilight is intact. If Sweetie was 12/13, then Flurry can't be much older than how we've seen her in canon.

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See, there we go. There's the justification I meant all along, totally. And nobody can prove otherwise.

Ayy, that cover art is a commission of mine. I look forward to reading this.

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When you put it like that, I guess you're right. That could make for a pretty decent ficlet
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Oh yeah, now that you mention it the uploader shares your account name. What a small world

well that was a strange read. very short but good

I really assumed this story took place in the same universe as the first 2 stories where Shining already fuck Flurryheart twice.

They would be one perverted fuck family if that was the case. Unless they already are

Hey, my boyfriend drew that picture!

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yes

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can do!
edit: he says thank you

Are you going to make a sequel with Flurry or the other Crusaders?

Looks like Twilie’s gonna be an aunt again. And have a couple more sisters-in-law.