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This was adorable, and with the new additions the pacing is spot on.
I love that they argue about who gets to be big spoon.
Dawwhhh!
This was adorable, sweet, loving and emotionally gripping. And it's great to see more works from you.
I don't know if you knew, but I think your awesome. <3
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Thanks once again for the pre-read. Your honest criticisms and encouragement were very much appreciated.
I love putting in tiny lover's quarrels. Where both people can get mad at each other but it's all good, cuz it's over nothing. Like big spoon. A very serious matter indeed.
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Personal praise aside (thanks again, by the way), I'm glad you thought so. I was really trying to get across the adorable love that these two have, so I'm very glad that got across. :)
Oh this was so adorable. I love the additions, they make everything so much more romantic and lovely. This is a brilliant little story, Holt!
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Thanks! I don't have much actual romantic experience, so it means a lot to hear that I did it justice.
I always found those remarks really cute and endearing since that means they know each other so well even the quirks.
A short but fun and extremely cute fic
This was really sweet. The banter at the restaurant reminded me of the one time I took someone out on a date that was far too expensive and stuffy for us.
Liked how the stuff in the bedroom was handled too. Caramel's a lucky guy.
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As someone who's never actually been in a real relationship, I love hearing that I got the dialogue and everything so accurate. Thanks!
This is just soo adorable.
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Glad you liked it! :)