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Holtinater


Trying to make up for lost time. DM me for edits

Comments ( 9 )

Well , this was a fun reading keep it up.

Wow, I wasn't sure what to expect but wow.
Good luck in the contest. (both of them.)

10511451
Hah, thanks! I haven't read any of the stories in either CoP or yours, so I honestly don't have any idea where I'll place. But I'm feeling confident!

This was a sweet and fun read. Some great characters and fun plot line. I look forward to more works from you in the future!

Sweet. Still a mystery why he changed in the first place, but we suppose that doesn't really matter in the end.

ROBCakeran53
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Good job. You wrote it in a way that the romance was there, while not just screaming DICK ON DICK. It felt a little rushed at a few spots, but over all it was decent. We're left with a very open ending (depending on who that can be good or bad) and a very unsolved mystery of what happened.

Hi there! I was one of the judges on the Change of Pace contest and I've only just got around to posting my feedback. Apologies for the delay. Blog post here: https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/937656/change-of-pace-contest-reviews

10518136
A few years late but I think it's due to the love blast at S2 episode finale. Lost his disguise and know-how about transformation but still somewhat remembers about the wedding, while his other memories are lost.

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