"Shut up you smug asshole! I'm trying to tell you that I love you!" A flash of viridian light enveloped Chrysalis like a cocoon, fading away to reveal an actual cocoon suspended from the ceiling.
O fuck no...
"At least we can agree on that!" Anon said. "Cheese-legs bug is way better than gay reindeer!"
Honestly, as much as I love this story. You could potentially end it here. This chapter had an air of finality to it. As much as I love this story and I'm sure you could go further. Just putting my two cents in love. All the same, loved it.
Always love us a Chrysalis Reformation fic! Was kinda hoping she'd end up mated to Anon, and this is pretty much that. Was wondering if Firelight would have conjured a barrel and funnel to catch Starlight's produce. Wait, heck, where are the Flim Flam Brothers? There's opportunity!
... and looking like she just got bukkaked by a rainbow.
Truly, the pinnacle of writing we expect from the strongest writer.
Great chapter and a fantastic ending. I didn't know Chrysalis's and Anon's feeling were that deep. I saw that they had a degen kind of relationship going on, but I didn't know it progressed that far. I like it all the same. I would love to see more of this couple and Anon's shenanigans in general.
I love the universe you have going on here. Celestia's literal devine plot, s-class stud, Fuc permits, even tax evasion! (Allegedly.) I hope you continue it.
Well, he did say he wanted to be in- er, with her after blowing off work for a day.
I do like the idea Anon is now Chrysalis' ankle monitor of sorts; go anywhere as long as he's close to her. The issue I see here is that condition will be abused for comedic purposes constantly. Heck, I'd be surprised if she can not get teleported home for a single hour. (Fuzzy hand/hoofcuffs should solve that problem unless Chrysalis has other ideas?)
...and if Twilight thought she was "fat" now, wait till she's hanging out at work with Anon and gorging herself on the miasma of lust so thick you can cut it with a knife. (Never seen a changeling yak in the toilet from overeating emotions but there's always a first time)
So now that that is out of the way... this was a fantastic read. Sure, maybe the fisting elbow deep trope got old, but you managed to keep ot always different and the exchanges genuine. Clop or not, this was fun. And characterization was fantastic.
I don't add straight smut to my watch list on my main account often, but this one deserves it.
Spike chapter when,
CivvieShakes?awwww romance!
It is time to RELEASE THE SHADOW!!!!!
Tempest Shadow that is.
...or mayhaps MoonDancer?
I kinda feel like we gotta give this one to Chrysalis, you know cause happy endings and all that.
The classics never die...
Have to admit I loved the end, more so when Chrissyi stayed true to her cheese legs self
maboi
A perfect chapter than:
O fuck no...
Exacly!
Damn fine educational and comical chapter
Applejack! To show her that his fist can hit harder than her bucking
Grany Smith because... This can only end in desaster
Smolder, because he is the
Dragon Layer!
Bon Bon, because you know S.M.I.L.E. want a field report on that Alien S-T-U-D
( Sexual - Transmitted - Ultimate - Dicking )
Yeah chryssi needs the next chapter for sure.
Pinkie Pie
Because we just need a chapter with her cumming party streamers or Gummy out of her Tummy
Yona,
Noone needs a harder Boner
Milky Way,
Because that Mare needs to show Anon how someone milks another like they usually do her
Autum Blaze,
Because no lover mare is hotter...
Do we need to call in the Firefighters?
Just good they have a waterhose installed already...
Ocellus,
Because she tasted human lust, now she wants a taste of human love-making ~♡
DRAGON LORD EMBER,
Because she can't get any in November...
But seriously, he studed Royalty of Equestria and a Dragon Lord will NOT BE DENIED! ~♤
The great and powerful Trixie.
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Whoa dude, that's messed up. But still, I kinda wanna see how that would play out. Up voted!
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After Luna birth Anon and Gabby shelling Anon? Creative comedy is what i expected from it.
Maybe the best chapter so far.
nice work
I'm still hoping for Chrysalis to transform into his mom after peering into his mind, unaware of the relationship. Or is she?
Honestly, as much as I love this story. You could potentially end it here. This chapter had an air of finality to it. As much as I love this story and I'm sure you could go further. Just putting my two cents in love. All the same, loved it.
Coco Pommel and Rarity.
Backdoor is currently in style in Manhattan and maybe Rarity will try whatever the other mare is having.
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I literally can't imagine Pinkie going at it without cartoon foley work noises.
More chrysalis
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This story is marked Complete, but that doesn't mean that I'm done with it.
"You know the whole 'alpha wolf' thing isn't real, right?"
Tell that to women, they go for alphas all the time.
Always love us a Chrysalis Reformation fic! Was kinda hoping she'd end up mated to Anon, and this is pretty much that.
Was wondering if Firelight would have conjured a barrel and funnel to catch Starlight's produce. Wait, heck, where are the Flim Flam Brothers? There's opportunity!
Loved your deconstruction of the "I'm a virgin who learned about sex solely from porn" worldview. Couldn't even fap because I was laughing too hard.
Anyways people seem interested in more Chrysalis stuff so I'll throw my vote in that hat.
ozone [Don't know if it was the autocorrect or what...]
That ending was adorable
I'll die on this Smolder hill
I would love a chapter with Tempest. Great story btw! Loved every chapter :)
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I'd honestly say to make a sequel, (which I realize you probably are.) And my love is for...... QUEEN NOVO via Tia Recommendation
A great ending for a great story.
Take my upvote
Anon: Alright, class. What is your method?
Every stallion: POW right in the pussy!
Jajajajajajajaja
Smolder, because the gauntlet was thrown.
I don't care who the mare is, but I want to see Chrysalis turning into a duplicate Anon and teaming up with him.
Smolder, or Dragon Lord Ember!
This chapter was especially entertaining to read. The number of references was even higher than usual.
Here's a select few that I liked a lot.
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Truly, the pinnacle of writing we expect from the strongest writer.
Great chapter and a fantastic ending. I didn't know Chrysalis's and Anon's feeling were that deep. I saw that they had a degen kind of relationship going on, but I didn't know it progressed that far. I like it all the same.
I would love to see more of this couple and Anon's shenanigans in general.
I love the universe you have going on here. Celestia's literal devine plot, s-class stud, Fuc permits, even tax evasion! (Allegedly.)
I hope you continue it.
Thanks for posting.
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Well, he did say he wanted to be in- er, with her after blowing off work for a day.
I do like the idea Anon is now Chrysalis' ankle monitor of sorts; go anywhere as long as he's close to her. The issue I see here is that condition will be abused for comedic purposes constantly. Heck, I'd be surprised if she can not get teleported home for a single hour. (Fuzzy hand/hoofcuffs should solve that problem unless Chrysalis has other ideas?)
...and if Twilight thought she was "fat" now, wait till she's hanging out at work with Anon and gorging herself on the miasma of lust so thick you can cut it with a knife. (Never seen a changeling yak in the toilet from overeating emotions but there's always a first time)
First and foremost, APPLEJACK.
So now that that is out of the way... this was a fantastic read. Sure, maybe the fisting elbow deep trope got old, but you managed to keep ot always different and the exchanges genuine. Clop or not, this was fun. And characterization was fantastic.
I don't add straight smut to my watch list on my main account often, but this one deserves it.
Getting Rainbow Deer Preggo's!!
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Agreed
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So keep it on tracking?