And with that, I'm done following this story. Zoophilia is an immediate "get the fuck out of here" for me. Shame too, I actually quite enjoyed this up until now
This was an outright AMAZING! chapter, i LOVED IT! For the Next Chapter. My Vote is an Double Trouble Royal Fisting Session. With Anon being Both Arms down to the Shoulders Deep inside of BOTH the real Daybreaker & the real Nightmare Moon at the same time. (In The Real Equestria. Not In The Dreamworld).
Pinkie, I was going to say Twilight, in next chapter because somehow Anon still a horse to check on him, but maybe Pinkie will beat her to it. Also don’t want her to kill me.
11834796 Human turned equine is fine, as he is still human in mind and is actually still sapient and can give informed consent to sexual conduct. I was more referring to the bit with AJ and Fluttershy, fucking an actual non sapient equine.
Sapience and informed verbal consent is key. Zoophilia ignores this fact entirely as it involves sexual conduct with non sapient animals, and physically and mentally unable to give informed consent.
Maud Pie, she's so hot specially with her always stone cold stoic face. My favorite fanfic of her is Break Up Blues by little big pony.
In conclusion we should all definitely vote for Mau-PINKIE PIE VOTE FOR PINKIE PIE!! SHE ABSOLUTELY SHOULD BE NEXT!! SHE'S THE BEST AT EVERYTHING!! I'M SAYING THIS ON MY OWN FREE WILL AND NOT BECAUSE SHE'S STARING ME RIGHT NOW WITH MURDERING INTENT!!
But Lonestar is sapient in this story. He was quite articulate when talking to Anon. And he can talk to Fluttershy. There was a whole bit about it. I made a special point of including it for exactly this reason.
"Is Fluttershy going to be okay?" Sunset chuckled. "Yeah. She'll be fine. We're all friends. And besides, AJ would never give up her interpreter for Lonestar. He's pretty good at communicating in his own way, but it's still nice to have Fluttershy relay the, uh... details, you know? For consent?" "That's... actually quite thoughtful," Anon thought at her as they arrived back at the portal to Equestria. "Maybe get AJ's consent before using her stable next time?"
11834827 Fair, I honestly didn't read that far. As soon as it started even looking like zoophilia, I stopped reading since even an inkling of it is enough to fill me entirely with disgust.
"There's someone in my head, and it's not me..." he groaned with a wince. After a moment he was able to clear his head and stand up. "Ugh, I just had the weirdest feeling of Déjà vu. Anyways... what does the to-do list look like for today's appointments?" Aloe gave him the appointments clipboard. "This looks... short."
Don't introduce Pinkie to Pink Floyd or you might get her reenacting her own special version of "Several Species of Small Furry Animals ..."
No idea wtf was up with this chapter, but I jumped ship pretty early on. If this was April 1st I would just ignore it and move on. No, this is just schizophrenia. I'm out.
Yeah... I didn't expect references to fan fiction about Sunset and Lonestar. however, for some reason, the action between a horse and a human leaves some unpleasant residue, unlike the action between a pony and a human. It's weird. By the way, why does Anon need a horse dildo?
11834904 I got as far as whatever the fuck happened on the chariot. This is way beyond Pinkie Pie. Even Discord generally doesn't disrupt things this much. For me, this was just way too far.
Yeah... I didn't expect references to fan fiction about Sunset and Lonestar. However, for some reason, the action between a horse and a human leaves some unpleasant residue, unlike the action between a pony and a human. It's weird.
I'm honestly surprised by the mixed reception with all the strides that Anon has made in-story overcoming his own aversion to inter-species erotica.
Sunset's Shimmer's defining characteristic is her connection to the Equestria Girls world via the portal that changes them from ponies to humans and back again.
Given that Anon is not from the EQG universe (because that would be too easy for the "return Anon home" arc), and given that Lonestar the horse is a canon element in the EQG show, turning Anon into a horse rather than a pony seemed like the logical lead-in to the "Homesick Shimmer" angle with Anon offering the stallion's point of view to make it a unique chapter once she won the vote.
And as I've previously mentioned, I made specific effort to distance it from actual zoophilia by; not only making Lonestar sapient, but also having communication possible via Fluttershy as a means (specifically for consent).
Though I suppose I could remove Lonestar's presence in the chapter altogether and lose very little of the core narrative, if only at the cost of Fluttershy's cameo joke.
By the way, why does Anon need a horse dildo?
Rainbow Dash bought his previous one as a not-wedding present. And Anon needs a replacement for confidential stud/client activities.
I got as far as whatever the fuck happened on the chariot.
Ah. It was a reference to Fake Taxi. (A semi-infamous porn series). The idea being that it was an enterprising pegasus mare trying to sneak in a session with Equestria's most eligible stud. It was, admittedly, a half-baked idea that I could easily cut if people really think it was that much of a barrier to enjoying the story.
Likewise, Pinkie Pie breaking the 4th wall out of sexual frustration seemed funny to me in writing it. But I understand that not everything that is fun to write, is necessarily as fun to read.
11834974 And before anyone thinks that I'm trying to strong-arm the voting, I'm really not. I'm actually perfectly indifferent as to who wins the vote. The entire purpose of this series was to challenge myself to write a (mostly) cohesive narrative based on external prompting. I'm just expressing (read: projecting onto Pinkie Pie) my bewilderment that this series has actually gone on this long, (semi-ending at one point), without all of the mane six having had a chance. That's all.
Anon's consciousness came back to him after a moment. He could still feel his dick twitching in the aftershocks of his incredible orgasm. His dick was still plenty firm, but it wasn't the steel rod I was a moment ago. Sunset Shimmer was laying limp on the hay bale under him. If it wasn't for the fact that she was still breathing so hard, she would have looked like she was murdered. And she still had most of his dick inside lodged her.
Okay Ponk, SHEESH, I'll vote for you, just put down the cream-filling bag and you can get your own pink ponk-ponut pushed in complete with its own cream filling
Not exactly what I requested since I wanted either Anon with pony Sunset Shimmer or human Anon and human Sunset Shimmer since I didn't think the portal would do anything since he was already human but the chapter was still good. Next I want either another round with Fluttershy or depending on when this happens in the timeline Kerfuffle from the Rainbow Roadtrip special should get a turn.
And with that, I'm done following this story. Zoophilia is an immediate "get the fuck out of here" for me. Shame too, I actually quite enjoyed this up until now
I actually want pinkie pie only to be cock blocked by some cutie map shenanigans or something
Ps. Nice
Well....that's something you don't see every day.
omg I'm dead!
This was an outright AMAZING! chapter, i LOVED IT! For the Next Chapter. My Vote is an Double Trouble Royal Fisting Session. With Anon being Both Arms down to the Shoulders Deep inside of BOTH the real Daybreaker & the real Nightmare Moon at the same time. (In The Real Equestria. Not In The Dreamworld).
Limestone pie
Pinkie, I was going to say Twilight, in next chapter because somehow Anon still a horse to check on him, but maybe Pinkie will beat her to it. Also don’t want her to kill me.
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Okay. But...
Anon is a human that has been fucking ponies for the last twenty one chapters.
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For what it's worth, I'm not planning on doing another chapter like this.
So you could just skip it.
But you do you fam.
Go for Ponk.
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Human turned equine is fine, as he is still human in mind and is actually still sapient and can give informed consent to sexual conduct. I was more referring to the bit with AJ and Fluttershy, fucking an actual non sapient equine.
Sapience and informed verbal consent is key. Zoophilia ignores this fact entirely as it involves sexual conduct with non sapient animals, and physically and mentally unable to give informed consent.
Maud Pie, she's so hot specially with her always stone cold stoic face. My favorite fanfic of her is Break Up Blues by little big pony.
In conclusion we should all definitely vote for Mau-PINKIE PIE VOTE FOR PINKIE PIE!! SHE ABSOLUTELY SHOULD BE NEXT!! SHE'S THE BEST AT EVERYTHING!! I'M SAYING THIS ON MY OWN FREE WILL AND NOT BECAUSE SHE'S STARING ME RIGHT NOW WITH MURDERING INTENT!!
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I agree with you 100%!
But Lonestar is sapient in this story. He was quite articulate when talking to Anon. And he can talk to Fluttershy. There was a whole bit about it. I made a special point of including it for exactly this reason.
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Fair, I honestly didn't read that far. As soon as it started even looking like zoophilia, I stopped reading since even an inkling of it is enough to fill me entirely with disgust.
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Perfectly understandable.
I'm glad we're on the same page regarding this issue.
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Fair.
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Agreed. I'm just going to pretend this chapter doesn't and never did exist for my own sanity tbh.
Love of god....we need to get pinkie some fist fucking. She desperate up in here
poor pinkie
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Yeah
Soooo... i vote for pinky?
Don't introduce Pinkie to Pink Floyd or you might get her reenacting her own special version of "Several Species of Small Furry Animals ..."
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I was genuinely worried that my Pinkie Floyd reference was going to sail over everyone's heads.
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To each their own.
The rest was pretty good, though, right?
(Obligatory "um actually, xenophilia" comment.)
pinkey and nice job on chapter
No idea wtf was up with this chapter, but I jumped ship pretty early on. If this was April 1st I would just ignore it and move on. No, this is just schizophrenia. I'm out.
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It's more like... Pinkie Pie is the Deadpool of MLP.
She's the only character that's aware that she's in a TV show, (or inside a fanfic.)
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Okay.
Marble Pie could use some relaxation!
Yeah... I didn't expect references to fan fiction about Sunset and Lonestar. however, for some reason, the action between a horse and a human leaves some unpleasant residue, unlike the action between a pony and a human. It's weird.
By the way, why does Anon need a horse dildo?
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I got as far as whatever the fuck happened on the chariot. This is way beyond Pinkie Pie. Even Discord generally doesn't disrupt things this much. For me, this was just way too far.
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I'm honestly surprised by the mixed reception with all the strides that Anon has made in-story overcoming his own aversion to inter-species erotica.
Sunset's Shimmer's defining characteristic is her connection to the Equestria Girls world via the portal that changes them from ponies to humans and back again.
Given that Anon is not from the EQG universe (because that would be too easy for the "return Anon home" arc), and given that Lonestar the horse is a canon element in the EQG show, turning Anon into a horse rather than a pony seemed like the logical lead-in to the "Homesick Shimmer" angle with Anon offering the stallion's point of view to make it a unique chapter once she won the vote.
And as I've previously mentioned, I made specific effort to distance it from actual zoophilia by; not only making Lonestar sapient, but also having communication possible via Fluttershy as a means (specifically for consent).
Though I suppose I could remove Lonestar's presence in the chapter altogether and lose very little of the core narrative, if only at the cost of Fluttershy's cameo joke.
Rainbow Dash bought his previous one as a not-wedding present.
And Anon needs a replacement for confidential stud/client activities.
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Ah. It was a reference to Fake Taxi. (A semi-infamous porn series). The idea being that it was an enterprising pegasus mare trying to sneak in a session with Equestria's most eligible stud. It was, admittedly, a half-baked idea that I could easily cut if people really think it was that much of a barrier to enjoying the story.
Likewise, Pinkie Pie breaking the 4th wall out of sexual frustration seemed funny to me in writing it.
But I understand that not everything that is fun to write, is necessarily as fun to read.
Maybe I was just off my game with this chapter.
Yeah, I think Pinkie has waited long enough. Best let her have a turn with Anon before she gets fed up and decides to come after you instead.
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I mean... it is tagged as a Comedy.
Pinkie Dimentia Pie:
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And before anyone thinks that I'm trying to strong-arm the voting, I'm really not.
I'm actually perfectly indifferent as to who wins the vote. The entire purpose of this series was to challenge myself to write a (mostly) cohesive narrative based on external prompting. I'm just expressing (read: projecting onto Pinkie Pie) my bewilderment that this series has actually gone on this long, (semi-ending at one point), without all of the mane six having had a chance. That's all.
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it - missing the 't'
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Fixed. Thank you.
Is that Pinkamina? Or is it just Limestone bath herself in pink dye? Whoever, I just cast my vote for Pinkei Pie to be on the safe side.
... actually, it will be even more hilarious if Pinkie's sisters actually take a peek at her session and demand for their turns next.
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Also "she still had most of his dick inside lodged her." Should be "his dick lodged inside her."
Okay Ponk, SHEESH, I'll vote for you, just put down the cream-filling bag and you can get your own pink ponk-ponut pushed in complete with its own cream filling
I vote for Pinkie Pie... to go on the blacklist. Bad Pinkie. Bad.
As for my actual vote: the Pie sisters while Pinkie Pie sits in the corner... or Cream Heart (Button Mash's mother)
A.K. Yearling, AKA Daring Do
since I read Ebonyglow’s mind-bending story
Ok, I vote for pinkie then
Let's give Fluttershy another go.
All 4 of the pie sisters?
five way with the pies, special guest Cloudy Quartz
And that ChanceTM was brought to you by Murphy's Law! Yes, Murphy's Law which can get you into a doozy quicker than you can say Anime!
Not exactly what I requested since I wanted either Anon with pony Sunset Shimmer or human Anon and human Sunset Shimmer since I didn't think the portal would do anything since he was already human but the chapter was still good. Next I want either another round with Fluttershy or depending on when this happens in the timeline Kerfuffle from the Rainbow Roadtrip special should get a turn.
Yeah yeah yeah I'll vote for Ponka Po. She made her case convincing enough this chapter... was a good bit of fun.