"It's quite alight," Anon said, wringing out his drenched shirt. "I'm glad you enjoyed yourself." He hung his shirt on a hanger and turned to head to the back of the spa, walking past Aloe. "I'm gonna hit the showers before I head home."
I think the misery stallion is shining, who else could deceive her about sex since young but her brother, shining helped her anally so he never get her sister pregnant, I could be wrong, but I doubt any guard would risk laying so stupidly about sex, and knowing she didn't know.
I vote for Queen Novo, after hearing what he could do for Celestia other queens might be intrigue and the single mom could like some spoiling. In her mermaid or wing form is complete up to the author
I have mixed feels about this chapter, mostly good, but the, lies was kind of a turn off for the rest of the chapter for me.
"Did he just kick out the princess for us?" on asked. "That is the most chivalrous thing I've ever seen!" "Oh my gosh. I have never been so turned on before." "Uhgh, fuck! I think I just came a little bit," another moaned as she clenched her hind legs together. Anon wasn't the only one making puddles in the lobby.
This parts made me smile through the rest of the story though.
the title and short description gives me the mental image of Anon elbow deep in pony pussy with one arm, while somehow giving an actual massage with the other.
So I'm not normally a huge twilight fan but this chapter was super adorkable and I loved it! I realize that it would probably be anticlimactic but I still nominate mayor mare.
Time for Anon to get a nightly visit from a certain alicorn investigating why half of ponyville is suddenly having wet dreams about Equestria's resident human.
I know this is a comedy, but I feel like Anon was done a disservice by pony society as a whole. Nothing was explained to him and he is treated rather terribly at times. Like a second class citizen that holds a valuable talent in demand. As for who will be next, we just had a line of mares denied an entire day that he worked on before Twilight.
I hope Anon can sleep tonight. Something tells me that Twilight and Shining are going to have a very long talk. One of them, most likely, in a very loud voice.
Luna, with possible Nightmare Moon Cosplay and Rp of being punished by our Studly Boy...also, I kinda want to see the B-Plot of Shiny and Twily...ESPECIALLY with her most recent update to Sex Ed!
Okay, we don't want Princess Luna to feel left out of having sex with Anon, but first things first. Why is Shining Armor painting miniatures with the Queen Bug?! I need an explanation here!
This chapter has been almost as bad as the holy vagina thing.
Goddammit Shakespearickles, your porn is great but your characters do a one eighty with their personality whenever it comes down to the business. It's very inconsistent and often just dumb.
At first I was like "Ooh, some very strong Twining implications!" But then I learned he was denying her orgasm and NOT returning the favor of oral. He doesn't deserve her!
My vote would be for either Cream Heart (Button's mom), or one of the other hot MILF moms (Twilight Velvet, Windy Whistles, Stellar Flare)... Mother's day, and all...
If not them, my favorite mare - The Grrrrrrreat... and Powerful... TRIXIEEEEEEEEE!
Well if Shining has a side gig, why not Cadance. So I choose Cadance, in the crystal empire, because I would like to see how the crystal heart would react. That and it would fit with the random kidnapping that Anon goes through with mares in power.
Kerfuffle next! The thought of her lame hoof clanking against the table as Anon makes her orgasm is too enticing.
i can appreciate the nerdness and the implied partnerships XD
Keep up the good work and are you looking for your next story idear
A proper UNDISGUISED Chrysalis chapter while Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle have a little talk.
I'm sure that I'm not the only one who felt that the Chrysalis chapter was nothing more than Fluttershy 2.0
First Celestia and now Twilight. How about an after-dark special with Princess Luna?
Also, I'm glad that Twilight was finally shown some proper attention and care.
Gilda? Could be interesting, a nice tail to work with plus plenty of feathers to ruffle.
I dunno, Button's Mom?
right now, I just wanna see Twilie and Shiney have...
the talk
alright
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Next:
Princess of the Night
Guardian of the dreamrealm
Shepard of the Moon
Mistress of wet dreams ♡
LUNA
O fucking yesss
Shining is a ass but a ass with good taste in games.
Grany Smith
I think the misery stallion is shining, who else could deceive her about sex since young but her brother, shining helped her anally so he never get her sister pregnant, I could be wrong, but I doubt any guard would risk laying so stupidly about sex, and knowing she didn't know.
I have my Top 3!
1. Starlight Glimmer
2. Trixe
3. Pinkie Pie
Why do I think that the Princess was having a naughty fling with her brother???
Maybe Pinkie Pie gets a turn?
I vote for Queen Novo, after hearing what he could do for Celestia other queens might be intrigue and the single mom could like some spoiling. In her mermaid or wing form is complete up to the author
I have mixed feels about this chapter, mostly good, but the, lies was kind of a turn off for the rest of the chapter for me.
This parts made me smile through the rest of the story though.
In the end, a happy Twilight, makes me happy!
If we’re reforming villains how about nightmare moon?
Mrs. Cake
Still eager to see Cocktavia.
the title and short description gives me the mental image of Anon elbow deep in pony pussy with one arm, while somehow giving an actual massage with the other.
Luna... With a fantasy of being Nightmare Moon being punished for her crimes.
So I'm not normally a huge twilight fan but this chapter was super adorkable and I loved it!
I realize that it would probably be anticlimactic but I still nominate mayor mare.
Had other thoughts at first, but I'm going in a completely different direction and suggest Apple...bloom
I hope Twilight does end up having a foal with Shi- er, I mean, her mystery stallon eventually. As for who's next...
Shining Armor.
Time for Anon to get a nightly visit from a certain alicorn investigating why half of ponyville is suddenly having wet dreams about Equestria's resident human.
I know this is a comedy, but I feel like Anon was done a disservice by pony society as a whole. Nothing was explained to him and he is treated rather terribly at times. Like a second class citizen that holds a valuable talent in demand.
As for who will be next, we just had a line of mares denied an entire day that he worked on before Twilight.
I hope Anon can sleep tonight. Something tells me that Twilight and Shining are going to have a very long talk. One of them, most likely, in a very loud voice.
It’s almost mother’s day, so how about some milf love? I’d say Cream Heart (Button’s mom) goes next.
Completely separate from the last bit, what the actual fuck, Shingy Dingy.
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Luna, with possible Nightmare Moon Cosplay and Rp of being punished by our Studly Boy...also, I kinda want to see the B-Plot of Shiny and Twily...ESPECIALLY with her most recent update to Sex Ed!
Luna for sure,
Buuut I think shinning is going to be in for a gender swap spell when cadence gets hold of him.
Poor Twiggles, good thing Anon could set her mostly straight. She's in for quite the discovery journey!
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I don't think the Shrek version is actually the full version of the song though.
Okay, we don't want Princess Luna to feel left out of having sex with Anon, but first things first. Why is Shining Armor painting miniatures with the Queen Bug?! I need an explanation here!
This chapter has been almost as bad as the holy vagina thing.
Goddammit Shakespearickles, your porn is great but your characters do a one eighty with their personality whenever it comes down to the business. It's very inconsistent and often just dumb.
Since the overwhelming majority chose Luna, I vote for Starlight after Luna's chapter.
At first I was like "Ooh, some very strong Twining implications!" But then I learned he was denying her orgasm and NOT returning the favor of oral. He doesn't deserve her!
nice work.
I think Twilight is about to be very focused on sex education to prevent what was just done to her. So, Cheerilee while Twilight substitutes for her.
Fucking Christ I had a stroke reading that. God damn you can be hilarious dude
My vote would be for either Cream Heart (Button's mom), or one of the other hot MILF moms (Twilight Velvet, Windy Whistles, Stellar Flare)... Mother's day, and all...
If not them, my favorite mare - The Grrrrrrreat... and Powerful... TRIXIEEEEEEEEE!
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That is so... Sexy
Well if Shining has a side gig, why not Cadance. So I choose Cadance, in the crystal empire, because I would like to see how the crystal heart would react. That and it would fit with the random kidnapping that Anon goes through with mares in power.
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I didn't see anybody link the joke
I think the beginning of the chapter had the snappiest dialog back and forth in the story. Felt hella good to read.
Too bad he injected the sample, twi could've thrown it at him in anger.
Also kinda sad when you feel she just wants love.
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Pinkie next. Or maybe she's the final boss. Enough hyperactivity might give even an S-rank a challenge in the stamina department