So was Luna actually there for any of that? Or was she always part of the dream trip? I know the wedding was, and considering how some of the sensations he was feeling as he pleasured Luna transitioned into their own trips I'm inclined to believe she was just part of the hallucination, but it also seemed like a believable interpretation of Luna's character, and unless I've forgotten (very likely) I don't think Anon has met Luna so it just seems odd it would be pure fabrication.
1096724810967100 Here, lemme just adjust the chapter title slightly... There we go.
Now her name can get thrown back into the hat again. So upvote this comment if you think Anon should track down Luna in the waking world and show her what for!
10967282 I hope I didn't come across as complaintive. I was just curious. That said, I will take advantage of the opportunity you presented to possibly see what felt a little iffy come to more satisfying fruition.
10967282 The biggest issue is that it proves her point.
Why does Celestia get a mind-altering pussy of undefined nebulous abilities, but Luna's isn't? How come Celestia gets him in the waking world, and Luna only gets him in the dream realm?
You know I gotta nominate my girl CADANCE. Especially now that there's a potential revenge angle to it. And/or jealousy of all the other royals having a turn.
If I could go a whole night without seeing a colt rutting his own mother, it would be a first."
Yeah. That sounds about right at this point.
"I'm the second most powerful pony in Equestria! My vulva commands your respect and attention!"
You have a real knack for memorable lines. And I always did like it when artists give her dappled bits. "Pussy freckles" is a lovely new addition to the lexicon, though.
Well. the ketamine explains why he couldn't wake up no matter how many levels of nightmare he went through.
Eh, not so much that, as is was the ethereal disturbance
Hmm this do not seem correct...
about your Prima Nocta, I thought
This should be Nox. it's a third declension term that goes Nox Noctis, so... Either go with Prima Nox, Or stay with the Primae Noctis... but that is genitive... as it's with ius.The whole phrase being ius (right) prima noctis [OF the First Night].
You made Luna a kinky bitch! Vag Vore, un-birthing, birth, How I married my mother, kids, aging and death from old age! Not to mention the nightmare hopping, (Aliens and Silent Hill scared me the most), and current real life events!
"Ket is for horses, you dumb motherfucker!"
All and all? Great fucking job! I don't care who the next mare is, as long as Chryssi gets some "air time"! Plus I can't really decide!
10967332 To be honest, I wrote and rewrote several sections of this chapter over the summer, and none felt as satisfactory as my Celestia chapter. Everything from dealing with Nightmare Moon, to the return of the Tantabus, to even Luna taking her season 1 form as a filly to tempt him Chris Hansen style. And none of them sat right. And I didn't want this story to tread into foalcon territory. Even if it's "an adult disguised in a dream". After 3 months I had a jumbled mess of story parts that felt like the disjointed narrative of a dream jumping around. And that was the basis for this. Personally, I know it's not my best work. But I just needed to get this story rolling again, not worry so much about always topping the previous chapter, and just have fun with it.
Considering it was a dream encounter, it was always the plan for Luna to have an extended side story in the waking world to make it feel more satisfying. Same as with Chrysalis having a similar opportunity by being a recurring character.
Don't know about you, but I hope Luna left him a spell that made his dick grow the size of a stallion at will, after a crazy trip like that andβ¦almost killing him I say he owns her that much.
Also, I say next mare be Photo Finish let her experience THE MAGIC!
10967472 I see, but yeah Luna has better give him something as compensation. She almost kill himβ¦maybe actually did since they need the shot AND electricity to bring him back
I loved how surreal this chapter was i hope you plan another in the future and use "Supernatural" and "X-files" as the next few pop culture references like this chapter. I also would love another chapter of Mommy Luna and young colt Anon. I really enjoyed that little dream sequence near the end. Also i laughed really hard when it was revealed that he drank horse tranquilizer and that was why he went loopy. I too would love Anon's next client to be Autumn Blaze for two reasons: One: She is cute and adorable as hell & Two: It would be a new creature he needs to learn how to help
I gotta ask was the plane and highway dreams references to "Final Destination" and "Final Destination 2" respectively? Great chapter i look forward to your next one
Heh, Luna was like, "while I have you on the line..." and then went "wait, he dropped out and I can't-- oh no, panic! We need help now!!!" Sounds like Shining might propose a herd...
Finaly Updateβ‘
Our beloved Luna get some attention
To bad it was a traindesaster noone could look away
Alien dream? Awesome π
School dream? π
Aircraft dream π
How many dreams can somebody have
I come for juicy action and get worldbuilding and character development... Now im confused
Its comedic but not really sexy
It's about time Aloe and Lotus experience the service their spa offers to Ponyville, don't you think?
So was Luna actually there for any of that? Or was she always part of the dream trip? I know the wedding was, and considering how some of the sensations he was feeling as he pleasured Luna transitioned into their own trips I'm inclined to believe she was just part of the hallucination, but it also seemed like a believable interpretation of Luna's character, and unless I've forgotten (very likely) I don't think Anon has met Luna so it just seems odd it would be pure fabrication.
Not what I was expecting when it came to the Luna chapter. Anyway, let's finish off the Mane 6 with Applejack.
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damn horses putting weird horse drugs in their horse food, how are humans supposed to know?
Eris. Discord wants to know what's so exciting about this whole shebang.
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She's certainly the one that called Twilight & Red Heart to the scene to save his life.
AHOY SPIKE ME BOI-O ME HARTY
I'VE OD'D ON KETAMINE AND AM TRIPPING BALLS
I'M GOING TO DIE SPIKE
ARGARGARGARGARG
What. The. Fuck.
I mean, I understand what happened, but it still needed to be said.
The whole tripping balls aspect REALLY takes away any of the enjoyability of it being a Luna chapter.
It raises too many questions on whether or not she was there or just his mind twisting itself.
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He hasn't had Pinkie yet, either.
I'm torn with saying either Starlight Glimmer or Applejack
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Here, lemme just adjust the chapter title slightly... There we go.
Now her name can get thrown back into the hat again. So upvote this comment if you think Anon should track down Luna in the waking world and show her what for!
10967282
I hope I didn't come across as complaintive. I was just curious. That said, I will take advantage of the opportunity you presented to possibly see what felt a little iffy come to more satisfying fruition.
After that one, I'm going way out in left field for my next pick.
Braeburn
Did I just saw a vore?
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The biggest issue is that it proves her point.
Why does Celestia get a mind-altering pussy of undefined nebulous abilities, but Luna's isn't?
How come Celestia gets him in the waking world, and Luna only gets him in the dream realm?
You know I gotta nominate my girl CADANCE. Especially now that there's a potential revenge angle to it. And/or jealousy of all the other royals having a turn.
Yeah. That sounds about right at this point.
You have a real knack for memorable lines. And I always did like it when artists give her dappled bits. "Pussy freckles" is a lovely new addition to the lexicon, though.
Well. the ketamine explains why he couldn't wake up no matter how many levels of nightmare he went through.
nice work
CHRYSSI
Hmm this do not seem correct...
This should be Nox. it's a third declension term that goes Nox Noctis, so... Either go with Prima Nox, Or stay with the Primae Noctis...
but that is genitive... as it's with ius.The whole phrase being ius (right) prima noctis [OF the First Night].
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Yes, among other things.
Dude!
You made Luna a kinky bitch!
Vag Vore, un-birthing, birth, How I married my mother, kids, aging and death from old age!
Not to mention the nightmare hopping, (Aliens and Silent Hill scared me the most), and current real life events!
All and all? Great fucking job!
I don't care who the next mare is, as long as Chryssi gets some "air time"! Plus I can't really decide!
Later. You crazy, creative bastard!
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To be honest, I wrote and rewrote several sections of this chapter over the summer, and none felt as satisfactory as my Celestia chapter. Everything from dealing with Nightmare Moon, to the return of the Tantabus, to even Luna taking her season 1 form as a filly to tempt him Chris Hansen style. And none of them sat right. And I didn't want this story to tread into foalcon territory. Even if it's "an adult disguised in a dream".
After 3 months I had a jumbled mess of story parts that felt like the disjointed narrative of a dream jumping around. And that was the basis for this.
Personally, I know it's not my best work. But I just needed to get this story rolling again, not worry so much about always topping the previous chapter, and just have fun with it.
Considering it was a dream encounter, it was always the plan for Luna to have an extended side story in the waking world to make it feel more satisfying. Same as with Chrysalis having a similar opportunity by being a recurring character.
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Soβ¦that means that he is tecnically Luna sonβ¦and/or husband now?
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It was a dream. It's not supposed to make sense.
Also it was a callback to an earlier joke in the chapter.
Also, it's symbolism!
Don't know about you, but I hope Luna left him a spell that made his dick grow the size of a stallion at will, after a crazy trip like that andβ¦almost killing him I say he owns her that much.
Also, I say next mare be Photo Finish let her experience THE MAGIC!
10967472
I see, but yeah Luna has better give him something as compensation. She almost kill himβ¦maybe actually did since they need the shot AND electricity to bring him back
Autumn Blaze!
Fire pussy FTW
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Yup! In the dream!
Back when Luna asked him if he ever thought about being a Stallion.
Aloe and Lotus.
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I support this choice, Autumn Blaze
Let's really mix things up.
How bout Gilda?
Super surreal.
Don't know why I expected anything else.
The sisters need his love, aloe and lotus.
Redheart's hoof smacked him upside the head. "Ket is for horses, you dumb motherfucker!"
Yea...about that... π
Octavia.
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That way lies madness...
That was nice, can't wait for luna to get laid in the real world now lol
I loved how surreal this chapter was i hope you plan another in the future and use "Supernatural" and "X-files" as the next few pop culture references like this chapter. I also would love another chapter of Mommy Luna and young colt Anon. I really enjoyed that little dream sequence near the end. Also i laughed really hard when it was revealed that he drank horse tranquilizer and that was why he went loopy. I too would love Anon's next client to be Autumn Blaze for two reasons:
One: She is cute and adorable as hell &
Two: It would be a new creature he needs to learn how to help
I gotta ask was the plane and highway dreams references to "Final Destination" and "Final Destination 2" respectively? Great chapter i look forward to your next one
The dream is collapsing!
Anyway.
Bonbon.
Some mare who'll be into Mother/Son roleplay. Even better if it's an actual mom. like Mrs Cake or Cadance.
Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if the seed's been planted in his mind with that one dream moment of Luna breastfeeding him.
Heh, Luna was like, "while I have you on the line..." and then went "wait, he dropped out and I can't-- oh no, panic! We need help now!!!"
Sounds like Shining might propose a herd...
Somehow I can't help but think Anon will go for another ones of those bottles later in the story.
Since he needed something after that trip, maybe he could use a little mmmm... "Berry Punch"
Finally.... It's back
Ouch... Man that hurts
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Huh. For once it's anon who the seed has been planted in.
...I'll see myself out.
Cadance, right up the ponut! π π
Reading this nearly gave me a panic attack
11/10 would take K and read horse words again