I come for the clop, but they make me stay for the plot, not the mare plot, well yes that actually to... but more of the entertaining side story and filler, not just Anons but story filler ♡
Nice to see one of the girls take a facial in this one, maybe Sunset Shimmer can order the "snow cone" and have Anon just completely baste her face with ape coom.
I busted up laughing like three times reading this, the best one of course being right at the end! You are definitely finding ways to keep things entertaining!
Was expecting mare plot for the last two chapters. Got a lot more plot than was expected. Many well timed jokes and references just could not help but bust a gut laughing many times over.
Sunset Shimmer and Sci-Twi please! The awkwardness for Anon discovering a portal to earth existed in Twilight’s castle, except its an alternate EQG-universe earth where humans evolved into pastel pigmented skins and anime hair. Maybe Mirror-Chrysalis from the Mirror universe.
"I never realized how right you were the other day. When you said that we were like weird puzzle pieces that fit together. I think that's what love really is. Everyone is weird. And love is finding someone whose weird matches your weird."
just finished reading to current and I NEED MORE!!!!! Amazing story and writing and had me laughing at a lot of parts, since Anon likes green eggs so much I wonder if he'll get some ham to go with it?
Up to date... What a wild ride... This story is AWESOME and hilarious I laughed Soo many times. And deep. Fluttershy heartbreak, Celestia chapter, luna chapter, both Chrysalis chapters. Those were a rollercoaster of emotions.
My vote for the mare of the next chapter is Sunset Shimmer!
Well anon is gay for Braeburn, so I nominate Braeburn!
Another amazing chapter from the Divine Master of Pony Smut Writing.
I LOVED this one Shakes, fantastic job my friend.
I come for the clop, but they make me stay for the plot, not the mare plot, well yes that actually to... but more of the entertaining side story and filler, not just Anons but story filler ♡
Next PINKIE PIE
Than we have all six complet đź‘Ť
Seconding on the Sunset Shimmer.
Nice to see one of the girls take a facial in this one, maybe Sunset Shimmer can order the "snow cone" and have Anon just completely baste her face with ape coom.
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I also vote Sunset.
Pinkie constantly popping up from out of nowhere, it's just too damn hilarious.
I'm going to start a chain for Queen Novo lol
Nice
I also agree that Sunset Shimmer should be next.
But after PINKIE PIE!!!!
This has so much heart for something that at the end of the day is just a pornographic marathon. Really gives it a lot of staying power.
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SUNSET SHIMMER FOR THE WIN!
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That's just how I do.
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That's valid.
But I assure you, if you are enjoying it non-sexually, that was also intended.
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Oscar Wilde said it first, but thank you for playing.
nice work and sunset for the win
I was starting to get worry about you.
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I was starting to get worried about you.
And no. She wasn't.
Not yet.
I busted up laughing like three times reading this, the best one of course being right at the end! You are definitely finding ways to keep things entertaining!
Was expecting mare plot for the last two chapters. Got a lot more plot than was expected. Many well timed jokes and references just could not help but bust a gut laughing many times over.
Have to admit the Applejack/Dash dynamic is interesting. Also, nominating Discord in female form/ERIS.
Okay, Sunset needs to be next.
But afterwards, Fluttershy repeat.
Absolutely nailed it with this chapter
Ahhh the mighty trumpet brings the freaks out to the floor.
*starts bashing an oven*
So…do they hydro-dynamic spatulas with port and starboard attachments and a turbo drive?
Everyone is gay for Braburn!
Great UHF reference as for a pick maybe one of the Kirins, Autumn Blaze or Rain Shine
Sunset Shimmer and Sci-Twi please!
The awkwardness for Anon discovering a portal to earth existed in Twilight’s castle, except its an alternate EQG-universe earth where humans evolved into pastel pigmented skins and anime hair.
Maybe Mirror-Chrysalis from the Mirror universe.
The dialogue in this chapter is flawless. Awesome job!
My vote is for Vinyl Scratch!
I’m a big fan of the way you didn’t just throw in a UHF reference, you made it kinky.
Training sessions with Anon, 42 bits!
Sweet Cakeflanks, Shakes!! Just when I begin to question my faith in WholesomePonyClop®, you come back swinging—for the mother-bucking fence!—and slake my thirst like a equanophilitic itinerant Preacher drawing from the Well of Smut Salvation© (Wholesome Ed.)!!
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And then, THIS!!!
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My faith is restored. For, how could I ever doubt . . .
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The World's STRONGEST Writer™
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Forgive me, for I am still recovering from Burns Night and Laphroaig!
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Fixed. Thank you!
Sunset Shimmer in either equestria girls world or she visits Equestria please.
just finished reading to current and I NEED MORE!!!!! Amazing story and writing and had me laughing at a lot of parts, since Anon likes green eggs so much I wonder if he'll get some ham to go with it?
I will never stop voting for milky way.
Up to date... What a wild ride... This story is AWESOME and hilarious I laughed Soo many times. And deep. Fluttershy heartbreak, Celestia chapter, luna chapter, both Chrysalis chapters. Those were a rollercoaster of emotions.
Thank you
Granny Smith because I’m a horrible person like that. Anon could use a nice curve ball since Mac already had a turn.
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my brother in christ she's dead
on second thoughts, shakespearicles has wrote some weird stuff before so i wouldn't really put it past him to do this
i think she's dead, anyways, there was a mention of her passing in this exact chapter irrc
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