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NEW ACCOUNT IS ThatOneBrix AND ITS THE ONE WITH THE CARL PROFILE PICTURE K THANKS BYE

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(NOTE: NOT A SHIP FIC.)

Rainbow Dash is a huge fan of Daring Do. When she learns that her and Sunset have to travel around to a convention to find the author of the books to make a deal, she has to not lose her mind over it.

Meanwhile, Sunset doesn't even like Daring Do and would much rather stay home and sleep.

Sex tag for mentions.

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Obligatory "First".

That being said, I've noticed a lot of apparent "drama for drama's sake", as I like to call it.

And Sunset's suit & fedora didn't make me think of a spy or assassin... it made me think Dr. Who.

Oh yes, it's also a very, very fast-paced story. It'd probably be a lot better by simply slowing down.

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yeah, I'm trying to improve on my pacing. Thank you for the feedback, Luna!

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WAIT I MEANT LYRA WHY DID I THINK OF LUNA AAAAAAAAAAA

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