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NEW ACCOUNT IS ThatOneBrix AND ITS THE ONE WITH THE CARL PROFILE PICTURE K THANKS BYE

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He's back.

He should be dead, but now he's not.

I'm going to come find you.

Once a family, now it's torn apart. Michael Afton has a plan. For years he's been retracing his father's steps to undo his crimes. Now, he's going to to put an end to his father, once and for all.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Man that is so awesome could you make more please this is going to get good.

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Yeah I'm working on the next chapter now. I work better when I get sleep so I'm gonna head off to bed and finish the rest tomorrow

Not bad! My only suggestion would be to remove all the “somehows”. It sounds weird for an author to not know what they’re talking about. Instead of saying “oh, this random thing happened and I don’t know why”, try to give some of these moments your own explanations.

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Oh thank you dude lol the next chapter should be out today

Cool dude, I love where this is going please make more chapters please this is going to be awesome.

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Thanks lol gonna give it a few days so everyone who hasn't read it yet can read it.

nope i think i like the old one better:facehoof:

"Keep your calm, William..." he muttered to himself. Sitting back on the bed he looked at his appearance again. He had the same amount of fingers, heck, he even had a red bowtie. Which Which as weird, considering that the suit he had been stuck in for the past 30 years never had a bowtie, even before he got stuck in it, he knew that It'd had a purple bowtie.

Red Bowtie?
His Design Wouldn't Happen To Be Based On Springtrap From Springtrap And Delilah, Would It?

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