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Somewhere, there is a place of legend, a place that should not exist. It is said that within the grounds of this ancient estate, there lies a great power. One that could restore what is lost.
It is known by few, and even fewer truly believe it is real at all.
They are fools. They have to be.
She must not fail.
Not again.
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Amazing start! I have so many questions and this really draws the reader in! Can’t wait to find some of the answers in your next chapter! Definitely tracking!
Please hurry with the next chapter!!!!
So its about a northern traveler?
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In a manner of speaking, yes. However, this traveler really only travels to one place.
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Working on it now, friend.
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Thank you for your thoughts! I'll certainly do my best.
*Gasp* Bought me to literal tears with this chapter! And that cliff hanger ending!
Can’t wait for more!
Well fuck this is depressing... I need more
Woohoo! A new chapter! And the intrigue draws on! Amazing work, and once again, there are so many questions which leave the readers’ minds spinning! Who is this shadow? Why can it not go to Twilight? What’s the choice? Why is it talking to Spike? What were the visions?
As always, excited for more and keep up the good work!
This... Is... So... Sad...
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Yeah ... I promise this won't all be sad. There will be some sweet moments strewn about.
Nice! Sorry I couldn’t leave a longer comment, I’m a bit preoccupied, but I really like this chapter and I can’t wait for more!
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The fact you're commenting so often and with such encouragement is amazing in its own right. Don't feel obligated to continue if you don't want to. I just appreciate your positive thoughts
God I am feeling something
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I'd like to say that is a good thing, but if this made you feel good, I'd be worried.
I wonder how serious horn damage is in this setting. It ranges from needing days of recovery to being permanent in most stories, so it's always hard to judge. Twilight didn't completely shut down, so I assume it's at least not a permanent injury, unless she thinks that the damage is limited to in the dream...