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Interesting, I got to read this SASP, get back to you on it soon-ish
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Sweeto. Hope you find it at least enjoyable. This is my first attempt at writing a story, so any feedback you may have is definitely encouraged.
Omg please please please don't let Best Pony die! I will never forgive you if she does. And her wings had better be able to save! I was enjoying this story before this chapter, despite that I'm not really sure about Human-turned-pony stories in general. Though I was enjoying it nonetheless, till I had to watch as Best Pony is mutilated like this. So for the love of Faust please don't let her die!
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Calm your hooves, Best Pony ain't going anywhere. You can bet your cutie mark that she will be perfectly fine in the chapters to come. As for Pinkie Pie, I wonder if there is more to this story?
Thanks for sticking with this story, I understand that Human-turned pony stories aren't always the best so I am trying to spice things up. All will be revealed in due time. No spoilers though.
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Looking forward to it
Oh Sweet Celestia this chapter was good. I'm sooooo glad Best Pony is alright, all things considered. And at least Carter is still with us as he stumbles along the life he has. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay!!!!! Flurry Heart, you are The Foal!! *hands Flurry Heart a little trophy* You are this chapter's Best Pony
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Yeah, I felt like I had to give credit where credit is due. I feel like the fact that she was born as an alicorn just can't go disregarded, so I gave her a little spot in the limelight.
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I can understand that. And it was such a perfect place for her to shine too.
As long as Flurry Heart knows that Best Pony will always be a certain flying Pride flag lol. No offense to Flurry Heart, or anypony else.
Great story! You did an excellent job MCX!
Can't wait to see the ending! I just spent my whole night reading this
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Talk about dedication! Much appreciated!
Great job MCX! This was a very good story. It's like a whole 20% more awesome! (Sorry I just couldn't resist)
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*Presses hand against forehead as a slight chuckle escapes.*
I loved that!
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I thought you might lol
No Applejack x Carter or ponies x Carter? :(
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No ships yet... But I'm already saying to much.
I can’t understand why this has such little comments it’s a good story the only thing I don’t like is the amount of people he kills so easily like he is in a video game otherwise good work
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Thank you for those kind words! Yeah, I must confess that I had the intention of making him that way on purpose because he is supposed to be an expert killer being in the army for 4 years and all (along with other stuff, but I'd be spoiling future events), but I just don't think I made that very clear, so he instead comes across as the laughable "superhuman" of sorts. Oh well, as long as the story is still good then I can't whine too much.
Great story(thumbs up)
To quote Finn the Pony...
Somepony's dreaming about Cupcakes...
Eeyup... there's Carter's present to Applejack
This was an amazing story to follow! Definitely going into my favorites. I can't wait to see the conclusion of the next part of this story!
Well, off to read the rewrite!
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Appreciate it, mate.