When a young man pushes away friendship due to a dark past, he is warned about an eternal damnation coming upon him if he chooses to continue his selfish ways. With one chance to fix his mistakes, he must go to Equestria to learn about friendship.
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I can’t understand why this has such little comments it’s a good story the only thing I don’t like is the amount of people he kills so easily like he is in a video game otherwise good work
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Thank you for those kind words! Yeah, I must confess that I had the intention of making him that way on purpose because he is supposed to be an expert killer being in the army for 4 years and all (along with other stuff, but I'd be spoiling future events), but I just don't think I made that very clear, so he instead comes across as the laughable "superhuman" of sorts. Oh well, as long as the story is still good then I can't whine too much.