A simple shopping trip. Started as gathering supplies and...ended up in the police station.
A short one off about Aria...and an example of why nothing's ever easy.
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WittyNameTFM
Just a nerd who's ships have formed an armada. I like rare pairs, but the list goes on forever. Hope I can throw out a fic or two you might enjoy. The SunDigo guy.
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Pretty cute
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Thanks!
Nice little slice of life fic.
I hope she broke a few of his bones. If not, I'd be happy to rectify that for her.
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I'll bet that his nose was pretty messed up from hitting that post.
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
D’aww, the ending is really heartwarming! Overall it was a rather enjoyable short read, if a bit fast paced—it’d definitely benefit from more description meat on the bones of the dialogue and also a bit more varied sentence length. The flow was pretty good, even if there was some rough wording here and there. Also, I noticed some recurring issues in direct speech. I can elaborate more, if you wish. If not, that’s alright.
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No, I get that. It's recently come to my attention about how off my descriptions can be. I've gotta work on that. This fic was sorta rushed and I just...felt I didn't have much to add to it. I can see what you mean. Maybe shoot me a pm about it. I don't mind getting advice on getting better.
But thank you for reading! It means a lot that you took the time, and also are willing to help me improve!
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It's alright, I understand. Glad I could brighten up your day a bit.
And I'll PM you in a short while!
That was amazingly sweet.
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed.