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WittyNameTFM


Just a nerd who's ships have formed an armada. I like rare pairs, but the list goes on forever. Hope I can throw out a fic or two you might enjoy. The SunDigo guy.

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Since the friendship games, Sour Sweet has been making an effort to stick with her new crew of friends. However in opening up more and socializing...she's learned more about her rapid mood swings. Her friends are supportive and after an instance where she almost hurt someone...was given proper help. She hates taking the medicine each day. It eats at her. Why isn't she normal?

Well...luckily she doesn't face this alone. More so when her metalhead friend catches her in an emotional state. Lemon may not be the best equipped for this...but she'll be damned if Sour suffers in silence.

Lemon cares too much about her to let her hurt without trying to help.

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Comments ( 10 )

Interesting take on Sour.

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Thanks, I kinda wanted her to be more than just a bitch...y'know? xD

Finally a new LemonSweet Fic. My absolute favourite Shadowbolt shipping. Really cute story! You write the Shadowbolts exactly as I imagine them. A group of really close friends, always being there for each other. I wish more people would see them like that. Hoping to see more Shadowbolt content from you in the future ;)

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Oh my God, thank you so much. I've been bogged down by moving...but I think you just gave me the drive to post one today. :pinkiehappy:

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You're welcome! Nice, glad to hear that :)

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I'm gonna be honest, I don't remember seeing a notification for this comment, but thank you so much! I really appreciate you reading and enjoying. Sorry for the SUPER late reply!

This one was good but I feel it has a little problem with phasing.

The start is really good and made me feel for Sour (I've had those questions myself) and Lemon helping ehr out of the school was also good, but I feel the change from comforting to confession was a bit... well, I was especting more of a struggle taking into account that when the gorup showed support, Sour felt like it was wrong for her to need them.

The other thing is that the time skips are a bit confusing (for a moment I thought they were dreams Sour was having)

However, the ship is solid I I do find the troubled personalityl + the carefree but ernest intentions is a good base for them.

I also like your interpretaition of both girls outside of school, I may take some ideas for the future.

hope to see them again later down the line.

PS: every time you called Lemon 'the taller' gave me a small chuckle

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It was my first real go at them. I do think I could have phrased some of it better, but I like how it turned out.
A lot of sour's struggle in her relationship is not feeling worth the attention she's receiving. I think I go into that more in future stories. If not, I really should. :twilightsheepish:

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There is always room for improvement, but it's a good start.

I really like them together.

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