Do you have the source for the cover art?

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Here: https://derpibooru.org/images/1379863
I slightly edited it to remove irrelevant and nsfw details.

oh goodness yes i loved this so much; thank you

i thing gleaming shield R63 shining armor should of been added sense that is also a royal and would make it so no resistance is possible in undoing her work

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That ending was... Weird.

'sleeping in naivete the night' - sleeping in naivete during the night

'it was what she did' - it was that what she did

'in a state one would generally state to be of sleeping' - generally say to

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Thank you, Razzy. I just went ahead and fixed those errors.

Thanks for the fic! It was good. That ending tho....

I wish for another story with Luna being plowed more by Chrysalis

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If you wanted a request, it’d be best to PM me with some more specifics.
I do have an idea for a sequel of this where the rest of the Elements as well as Shining Armour get captured too, though that likely wouldn’t have much focus on Luna.

If all you want, though, is just Chryssi pounding Luna, I may be able to work that into something else (don’t quite any ideas for anything else just yet).

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During lunas enslavement and use as a sex object and how her mind is both still resisting and breaking which would lead to her unleashing nightmare on her

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Hmm, that’d probably work best as an alternate ending of sorts.
I suppose I will see what I can do with it.

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I can’t wait

wished a bit for alternative chapter, where Luna transformed into Nightmare Moon before Chrysalis split her into Luna and Nightmare Moon with the help of the others, where Chrysalis made them both into broodmares or only Luna, where NMM make a deal with Chrysalis, that she can Have Equestria, but NMM can have her endless night and some fun time with Celestia