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EpicGamer10075


Gamer, Writer, (Aspiring) Artist, and really fricking tired. Commissions open.

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Kadruk #1 · Jul 8th, 2021 · · 2 ·

Well now, there's a familiar pic~
Definitely a nice surprise!

This was hot, I am very please :3

Alright, I’m seriously going to need some better feedback on this.
I know I’m relatively biased towards my own stories, but I really thought this one was good! And yet, 19 to 24 like-dislike ratio.
I’m not sure why, it’s not super different than its prequel and the commissioner very much liked it, so I don’t really get the problem.
Even worse is how the comments got downvoted...

And, you can’t really expect me to make good content without providing any constructive feedback, so, for the love of Faust, someone tell me what the f*ck the issue with this is!

Sorry if this is off-puttingly visceral of me, I just need to vent my frustration.

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I don't worry, this has noting to do with your writing skill, this is just a small group of people that dislike this couple, this has happen to every RarityXChrysalis story I've commission so far, when the story gets publish it gets downvotes quickly, it's really annoy, but give it a couple of days, this story will get more upvote then downvote, I'm sure of it, it's really good.

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Well, I suppose this an intro to internet trolling of sorts. It just has never happened to me before, so...
Thank you for the support, though.

Othat than occasionally being a little bit confusing, I have no idea why this would have anywhere near this amount of downvotes. +1 from me.

I will speak from my point of view, the story is exceptional, I love the description and also the very good narration. While it is true that some give you their thumbs down, it is because 1; did not take the time to read it, 2; They are people who do not like futa or hyper or 3; subnormal.

I personally like history and besides that it inspires me to make my own story, of course it is not fiction since I am Spanish-speaking, and I choose to write in fanfiction. And as an extra piece of information, I made a story that I have in fanfiction inscribed in the story before this one.

I'm not a good writer, but I get to know myself well in fanfiction.

That said, my rating is the best. 11/10 and I put an extra point because I like hyper

I think a few people didn't like how you said there was mild story yet there really wasn't. There was only the small amount of time with Spike and Rarity and then the awkward transition. Plus some people don't like hyper muscular characters who weren't that way before. The only thing that I can tell is that the writing can be a little unwieldy. I think people might have been expecting more story than was actually included. I think it is just a little bit of this and a little bit of that. Also stories usually get a flurry of downvotes early on and that downvotes will stop quickly enough.

It is also a very specific fetish and not everyone likes this type of fetish. Instead of ignoring it, some people just downvote it. If the person who commissioned you was happy, I wouldn't worry about it too much.

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Yeah, so trolls, as I said before.

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Hm, maybe, but I doubt the lack of plot would make much of a difference. I did change it to something more apt, though.
I guess I just didn’t expect this one to be so polarizing when the other stories I’ve made were better received.

Thanks for the support!
I gotta say, it is rather disappointing to see my stories have so few helpful and supportive comments even when I know a lot of people read them, so it’s very nice to actually have people say how much they like my stories.

I thought this was a great story and would absolutely love to see a sequel of what the rest of the Mane 6 getting a similar treatment!

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Thanks for the support, and while I do have ideas for that, I’d prefer adding some other fetishes to keep them separate from the other stories.

I may get to it on my own, but as stated in the description, anyone’s more than welcome to commission me for it if they have an idea they’d like me to write.

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Ah, missed that part of the description.

this would be interesting to see continue so the changeling queen would have all the element under her control so nothing could stop her take over after its done she could then walk around taking any mare she wants just passing by think of the possibilities of when that happens equestria would turn into sexquestria

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