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Oops! Thanks for catching that. It was the original story idea before I had other plans. Should be changed in a few hours.

This was a dark wild beginning I hope it get better,and his blood list gets cured.

This was a Interesting chapter most likely the beast went to get help from Fluttershy if it's good.

This was a fun and cute chapter I hope his personality get better.

This was a instance heart pumping chapter I hope he can learn to chill out.

Dang other then his attuned this was a this was a interesting chapter. Looks like his only friend for awhile will be that wolf ,I wonder what's going to happen next.

Oh my god his personality is infuriating I just want some one to cheek his ego :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

Jeez the MC can be a dick..... I love it! Keep up the good work friend I hope to see another chapter with Blue Balls getting either scared or the shit beat out of him again. :scootangel:

Axel, fool of himself,

Don't you mean full of himself?

I used [Noclip] to faze through the window. I've always wanted to do that. Boy does Gmod have me too hooked after all the years.

His next ability should be [SpawnMenu] so he can get free stuff

"Can you now? Lets see about that." A pony who is up for a little violence and isn't touchy with people? That I could put up with. "I challenge you to a friendly honor duel." She declared. The guards cheered.

Probably looks like this
But replace Dio with luna and jotaro with the MC i.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/facebook/000/028/775/Screen_Shot_2019-03-06_at_4.32.48_PM.jpg

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I've checked the story by using Ctrl+F and by re-reading it and I can't find this line. Could you locate which scene it is in?


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:ajsmug:

This was was a heart pumping chapter I still can't stand the MC personality but I will continue to push through.

Axel is making it harder and harder to like this story please tell me he gets better.

Comment posted by 3-tap deleted Jul 8th, 2020

Dont stop. This shit is golden and I want to see more m8. The general aura of "I dont give a fuck" just gives me chills. The good kind. You write stuff you like, not applying fan service.

This story great if you were to not Pay attention to how the story goes you Wouldn’t see how the main character would lay out in the environment of it. how every side character that the main character meets makes the story much more Magnificent to read. But real Credit of the story Is the writer himself SkyrinEmperor

I give this story a 10/10

Good to see this story is still living I hope to more chapters soon to come keep up the good work I like how you introduce a bit of science in this chapter can't wait to read more

You cant blame the ponies to use magic to cut corners all the time

"If you know the pain of burns, even minor ones, you would know why." The ponies thought about it for a second before realizing what I meant. Horror is all their gonna feel when I'm around I guess, because that third wave of horror actually showed in the eyes alone.

Im confused, what does he mean exactly?

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If you were healed from a burn wound, then put back into the situation that caused the burn wound and repeat this process, then you are in a cycle of pain that doesn't stop until the person playing with you gets bored.

The synopsis makes this story sound like it's a sequel. Is it one?

This was definitely worth the wait. I can hardly imagine what Celestia was thinking when she grabbed one of the most powerful creatures know to Equestria.

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I do actually plan on making this a sequel, yes.
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Glad you liked it :trollestia:

I agree with Axel! That is total BS, and total Deus Ex Machina, Unfair Cheat Code, and Plot Armor STUPIDNESS!!!!

WELP! Fight Cheat Code with Cheat Code! Like Infinite Ammo for the BFG 9000, and Infinite Extra Health!!!!!!! Let's see if the "Magic Of Friendship" tops this! :pinkiecrazy:

Hey great work on this story this volume end was good keep it up can't wait for future chapters

Can’t wait to see him come back and destroy them. Also, couldn’t he have just done the nerve damage trick and made one of them feel a ton of pain to not be able to focus?

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I did think about that and did simulate the possible outcomes. It resulted in the chances of it succeeding being severely low considering that Discord was in the area and watching over the entire thing. It would only take Discord either taking the blow or summoning objects in front of them to make that method completely worthless (Discord can't take any physical damage).

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So he would have lost because of more dues ex BS then, damn. Guess I'll just wait to see him get his revenge. Glad to see you reply though, would hate to see the story not continued.

Hopefully this actually goes down the committed vengeance path and not some forgiveness bullshit. Seen so many stories do that it it just ruins them imo, as if wanting to hurt the people who wrong you is a bad thing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I am so fuckin confused right now, this whole chapter was so all over the place and next to nothing was clear as to what actual the fuck is going on. Like the dude is a literal psychopath, so thats probably why this looks like it's from a crazy persons insane ramblings. I really hope the next chapters clear things up even a little bit

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I have to agree, so far all I've gotten from this is that he's a psychopathic narcissistic arrogant prick with zero redeeming qualities to make him even slightly likable.

Hmmm..... honestly, while my previous comments still stand, you've actually gotten me hooked on this story........ though with it being on hiatus with no word from the author, my expectations are tempered because of experience. Rarely ever seen a story pit on hiatus ever come back.....

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Don't worry, I'm still here. Its on hiatus because of school, but might be back in less than a week.


Also telling why he's a narcissist would be a spoiler :trollestia:

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Ah, school, the bane of many, I feel you there hah. Well it's good to know you're still around m8!

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