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NinjaMare


Welcome to main page readers! my name is Floral Essence (aka NinjaMare), and here you will find mostly HiE fics, among other kinds of fics. hopefully you all enjoy what I have to offer.

Comments ( 137 )

I love this story!!! I am on Chapter 3 and it is going good!

Ima take a break for now though, Let the chapters pile up before starting again!

Keep up the good work!

Why isn't there a Kingdom Hearts and a crossover tag?

This was a epic mysterious beginning can't wait to see where this goes.

This was a insane that old man just unknowingly replaced them.

Dang they are all have sad pasts.

This was a awesome battle/spare chapter. Things are about to hit the wall.

I like it so far, my only negative comment, it needs a little editing, you swap between past tense and present tense frequently.

OMG this was a beyond wild and epic battle and lore chapter. I hole they can help Dragon face.

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because this isn't a kingdom hearts cross over. the humans come from a universe i made up called the Un-Natural verse. basically its like the X-men universe, but the rates of people being born are like 1 out of 10, and the people who have powers actually try to hide and live in fear (at least the non-criminal kind)

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i try my best, but i don't think i'm a very good writer and often rely on the system to help me. which doesn't help all that much most of the time.

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well i'm glad you're liking my story so far, if you have any pointers or critics, don't be afraid to post them. i really need to learn how to write better.

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do you want me to spoil a bit, just give you the context about this old man, or wait till you see him again?

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the thing i wanted to go with MY humans, for any fic i make, is that the ponies will have to work for the humans trust and friendship. instead of expecting to be the best of friends in like 2 minutes, cause that's not how real friendships are forged. also, the humans aren't going to immediately get wrapped up in the 'paradise' like style of Equestria.....as most other humans in other fanfics usually just do.

Looks like the six humans have monster on the way.

now if you folks like to learn about the world where the Six Humans come from, please leave a comment down bellow. personally i think it might be a useful bit for you guys & girls to learn the world these guy's come from, and how humans in that world got their powers. but i figured that most of you might not care.

so let's say if i get like........10 comments of "Yeah i would like to read about the Un-Natural verse (the name i gave the world these humans come from)." then i'll work in a chapter of exposition about the world.

This was a awesomely chill and gun chapter of the Guy's just exploring the town but it looks like they are going to have to save Manehatten soon.

here's a question for my readers, out of the six so far, which one do you like. either for their character or just their power.

This was a wild chapter with a sad in I wish Dragon face a peaceful after life. This his going to hit the pony's hard.

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especially since they have never dealt with anything like suicide, at all. i honestly can't picture any form of MLP where ponies see others just kill themselves.

This was awesomely chill chapter that went into a heart pumping cliff hanger.

the ponies will realize that the appearance of the six humans, is only the beginning of trouble that is to come. remember, the old man can displace anyone he wants to get rid of. i'm trying to go for the angle of 'We never had troubles like this....before YOU all came to Equestria'.

Is this a kingdom heart story because of sex characters look like they're from the organization 13

Dang I Gauss they will only deal with un-naturals cases for now, and how they reached was realistic to a lot of traumatized people,they still have there shields up.

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no, i just used the picture because it was the only decent picture of six obscured figures i could find at the time.

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that's going to be one of the main conflicts. ponies are WAY To fast to be all buddy buddy, quick to get over the bad stuff in life, and show no signs of dealing with trauma. humans like to take their times in these matters because:
A.) humans need to develop the bond with another in order to feel like they can whole-heartedly trust someone, and call them a friend. instead of spending 2min and say: We are the best of best friends now!

2.) when it comes to humans and their trauma, it's not like a light switch, they need to work it out or risk having horrible side-effects that can affect lives. just because the 6 are in a safer environment (mostly) now, doesn't mean they'll just get over EVERYTHING they've went through back on Earth.

and finally Z.) with the amount of stuff they had to do to survive, both from those who want to harm or kill them to even getting by, these guys just want to live a nice quite life without resorting to breaking laws or fighting anyone, that's why they are basically saying: ponies problem is ponies problem. plus, there is no bond between the human 6 & the Mane 6, that the guys would actually risk their lives for them, yet.

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Then why is the cover art a bunch of people wearing Organization XIII cloaks?

This was a sad and heart touching chapter I fill so sorry for Vermin but at lest he had a peaceful end.

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no particular reason. i just used it because it has six obscured figures, in a pose that isn't a full line up or just a bunch of people in a 'funny' photo.

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how do you think the ponies feel about this? i mean, first they witnessed Dragonface committing suicide, and now they know that Plasma killed Vermin to end his suffering of being a feral animal?

This was a awesome and chill chapter I like that he was able to convince DT I hope he can turn her nice sooner.

Dang love the new chpater we gonna see this dude in action next chpater?
Also keep it up

This was nice chill setting in chapter Intel that end Damm hear we go again another monster. PS hopefully there will be a faster was of letting the guys know that 1 its from there world and 2 its a unnatural.

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well it all depends if an Un-Natural causes enough ruckus, that weren't it to be listed as a government problem, and Celestia and Luna receiving word of the Un-Natural. Enigma's teleport is random, no one knows where they'll end up if he zaps them to Equestria.

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until something is done about Enigma, anyone he uses his power on with no intended destination, will end up in Equestira. and trust me, Plasma and the other weren't the first.....the other humans before them.....just didn't survive where they ended up being teleported to.

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E'yup. You see, Enigma can teleport anything and anyone to any place that he either has: seen/been to/or has an in-depth knowing of. but if he uses his power with no destination in mind, his power acts as a dimensional portal and send them to a random dimension. for this story, I made so Enigma's power sends people to Equestria when this happens, and since Enigma doesn't even know that Equestria is even real, his powers has no means of picking a location. so the poor suckers get teleported to random areas around the planet.

Here we go again I hope there's going to be ok against him. I hope the one RD found is a good one.

I can only imagine what that might have been like for them growing up. And then multiply it by 10 at least most likely.

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I can understand that. I always find it odd that other fics have the humans and ponies practically skipping down the road together almost right from the start.

Sweet Celestia! I soooo hope you didn't just kill those 3!

Let me guess.... his favorite program is a certain show about 6 particular technicolor quadrupeds and their friends.

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