Discord’s life was perfect. Celestia had finally retired, Equestria was safe from any and all threats, and most importantly, he’d been reunited with his long lost daughter, Screwball. So, naturally, something absolutely, positively terrible had to happen.
King Sombra, former king of the Crystal Empire, and Discord’s ex-coltfriend, is returned from the dead, and it’s up to Discord to reform him. Found family mishaps, kissing, and unsolicited marriage counseling ensue.
Trigger warnings for: Suicide mentions, mild homophobia, sex mentions, and gay horses in love.
There are a lot grammar mistakes
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Would you mind showing me some examples so I know what to avoid?
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I’m not sure if I can do it
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You said there were a lot of grammar mistakes in my story, would you mind showing me at least one?
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Ok
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There should be said
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Where? I noticed a spelling error, but there’s nowhere in that sentence I need the word said.
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Oh, sorry
why does it feel like discord is just going to get manipulated again while falling hard
Please update