An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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I thought that Five Score stories got banned, was that not the case? or was that rescinded recently or something?
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The ban on them was relaxed years ago actually! After that initial ban was relaxed, a submitter had to have X number of words to the story (I think it was 20,000?) or be finished when publishing AND we had to be at the point where there were ponies. The wordcount requirement is gone now completely I think.
So now it's just like all fimfiction: it still has to be related to one of the shows: MLP:FiM, Equestria Girls or what have you. Meaning the requirement for there to be ponies will always remain.
There's not as many, but people are still writing stories! Here's the group: Five Score Multiplied By More
That.Was.Awesome!!
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They were banned!!? What for? I dont really read any news or drama that appears here but what warranted a genre to be banned.
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Too many writers were submitting one or two chapter stories that were just humans discovering cutie marks and these stories never progressed past a chapter or two. So they were less a
transformation story and more a "I found a strange tattoo" story that was only kind of pony related and didn't take place in Equestria or with Equestria characters. And when you get a lot of those, they get annoying fast because those violate the rules for submitting stories. So they went through the banning process as described.
awesome chapter. grate righting team.
We do not speak of the trailer!
But regardless, Hope has indeed finally arisen!
So much darkness and misery only now finally starting to fall to the side. I can almost sense that first *real* smile on Berry's face. Horn restoration though? Bet Tempest wishes she had something like that. Magic can solve all. Luna to the rescue!. Finally starting to see things turning up.
I am loving the five score universe. I started with your story, and have gone to a couple others, including the "root" story. I love how you brought in the sonic rainboom.
I've said it in other chapters, you are a really good writer. I was still feeling the impact of the last chapter while reading the first part of this chapter. Your narrative did a wonderful job, and I felt Berry's plight, and emotional release when she realized who she was talking to.
I look forward to readung more of your work.
A five score fix that I haven’t read? That’s rare.
It’s not labeled as dead and actually has some girth in the amount of words! Yes please.
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Should be easy to tell that I'm hooked. Just finished the chase and confrontation with Discord. Berry refused to give up and saw right through Discord. I've always liked when he is characterized as a more tragic and evil character, chasing the one thing he can never have. All the chaos is just a way he distracts himself from the existential crisis that is his immortality and the knowledge he will forever be alone watching a cold uncaring universe burn out..
The part with Ruby and Luna making the save, then the assist with Dash, and the hunters showing compassion was a great way to conclude the conflict too. You keep putting Berry into hopeless situations from the alcohol abuse, to the traffickers, to a literal emo god, and yet she pulls through.
I thought being Brian might have taught Berry to be a better pony. However, it looks like she had that inner strength all along, and she just forgot due to the curse. Her friends were her greatest strength and like most humans, Brian discounted friends and turned to vices to try and fill that void of loneliness.
I'm curious which story you're basing your Luna (and presumably later Celestia) on, if any! Return of the Dawn is by FAR my favorite Five Score story, so I was wondering if you took inspiration from it.
Also your prose is amazing and I love these chapters but I don't have the energy to go into detail.
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The story of Princess Luna was based on 'The Lunar Phases'. So I think Celestia would be automatically based on Total Eclipse of the Sun. It's a canceled one though.
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I tried to keep Celestia and Luna somewhat vague but I had way more to work with Lunar Phases so I took more inspiration from it. Admittedly, Return of the Dawn has way more going on, but I felt the characters were a little flat and I didn't agree with everything going on. That said, the actual text of Total Eclipse of the Sun is just okay. What's great about it is the connections it has to other stories: the also cancelled A Love For Madness, The stories connecting it to Little Horn stories, Lunar Phases, etc.
That said, I commend the author of Return of the Dawn for how much they did and it's criminal they didn't finish. They had some new ideas and I liked a lot of them. I don't know if it was really only one chapter away from being finished, but it was definitely on the edge of its climax! Absolutely worth a read anyway.