An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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i have to wonder if discord is genuinely sadistic or was just in such a desperate state not to care all that much about how badly things would play out when the curse started breaking down, then again if my understanding of the situation is right there wasnt much choice by the time he managed to break free
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I've seen a few interpretations: He could just be that sadistic and lack empathy, he could care but think it's "worth it" for whatever reason or he might not fully consider his actions beyond "oh that sounds fun".
To some degree, the Discord in this alt universe is, by nature what he's done in the plot of the original story, more malevolent than what we ended up with in later seasons of the show.
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i dont think it was ever directly stated but in either the main story or one of the closely linked side ones it was heavily hinted that he did it because equestria and earth were spiraling toward destruction in opposite ways and this was a solution, but given his tricky nature its no wonder that its impossible to be sure and even if its true that doesn't mean he isn't enjoying every bit of this. i certainly recall him enjoying the uncertainty over his motive
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This was definitely Dust on the Wind and very possibly a few more.
As far as I recall, the mane six weren't sure if Discord even knew what world was on the other side of his spell. The main fic seemed to leave motive for some of his actions open to interpretation (by other writers?)
Wow...this chapter was definitely something. An emotional roller coaster for all involved. Poor Berry, but Nathan crossed a very real line that shouldn't have been crossed, no matter how guilty they felt, but still...Geez. Curious about what's to come next, if a little anxious...
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I'm glad this was emotional for you! And I almost feel sorry about putting others through this. I hope this didn't turn too many people away.
I can promise there are plenty of good feelings coming in this story as well! I promise it's not just a series of terrible things happening to the protagonist.
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Snugs! Just rough to get through, but it'll just make their happiness and success that much more potent!
Well, this story is definitely shaping up to be among of the best Five Score sidefics I've read!
It can be delicate to follow a character, especially a protagonist, who keeps making 'bad' choices. But Berry is just so relatable, and her difficulties dealing with her issues so understandable, that it makes it all the more heart-wrenching and dramatic rather than potentially frustrating. It certainly helps that she's conscious of her own failings, and that she's still a good pony where it counts. Even if the path to recovery is long and arduous, I'm rooting for her!
Oh and this situation of having two characters being just as 'Mom' as the other in Ruby's eyes is so very fascinating. Like the shift from brother-sister to mother-daughter, it's always interesting to see how personal relationships are forced to transform and adapt.
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Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback and you honor me because I've read a lot of these stories. To know that it's looking like my addition will be with the good ones is really inspiring! I'm excited to share the rest of the story with everyone and I hope it can live up to the expectations I've seem to have set for you!
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woof that was rough, it was well done enough that I had some real nasty response to it as well (Special Place in the pit of my soul for hatred for those types)
I'd say it's good but I don't know if I personally would be able to take anything darker than that. Long as you have some peak to go with the trough it'll all be fine. Excited to see where you go from here.
would like to say that I feel for Nathan, it's really easy to fall to those bad influences with social disorders and such. But at some point he's gotta pick and I'd say he's crossed that line. Sucks for him, and perhaps Berry shouldn't have asked permission to bring him, instead just showing up with him. Mighta been good for the poor dude.
Supposedly increasing her speed from Mach 5 to Mach 10.
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Dash reacting to such accusations:
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Lol, oh for humor in the darkest of places.
IT'S THE CHERRIES AND BERRIES!!
(sorry, had to!)
Man, this story could have gone so many ways at this point. I don't know if it's just the writer in me, but during that scene with the drug dealer pressuring Berry, I couldn't help but pause and visualize all the possible story branches here. It could have gone wildly different, like one of those wholesome Choose Your Own Adventure novels...
turn to pageCall your therapist.Jokes and shitposting aside, that was a very memorable chapter ending with that intense non-con scene. That whole closing scene felt much more real than most of the fetishized rape-fics that are all over FimFic. Rape in general is incredibly popular across fanfiction (There is even a Group here on FimFIc for them, with subfolders for over twenty rape subgenres) That's not to say I have anything against the popularity of rape fics, after all I've written a few myself in the past. However, most rape themed fics tend to fetishize it, or revel in the grimdark elements of it, similar to how horror movies make it an exciting spectacle to see just how dark they can get.
But with as popular as rape scenes are in fanfiction, you don't see many authors writing like you have here. Where it's a grounded, and sadly realistic portrayals of how domestic abuse unfolds in the real world. You could have easily catered to popular demand and made this scene fetishized in one way or another. But you took the proverbial road less traveled, and the more uncomfortable road at that. Props.
Additionally, you somehow managed to make the reader sympathize (at least somewhat) with both the victim and the abuser. Having the reader sympathize, even slightly, with a protagonist's sexual abuser is no small trick to pull off when writing. And you managed to do it in the context of My Little Pony fanfiction like it was nothing.
I think you're a much better writer than you give yourself credit for.
funny that she only got the genders of Dash and Jack right
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Right?? I think that's funny. If I had to guess blind, those would been my guesses.
Out of curiosity are you auto-translating the story into Portugese? Does that work okay?
I love all the comments by the way. Thank you.
Damn, Nathan watched so much pony, but friendship lessons have gone completely over his head here. From the moment he started blabbing to the drug dealer while high, I knew this wasn't going to end well. A broken arm is the least he deserved.
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its really not unlike a lot of people i see nowdays from people who do watch the show, except more extreme. makes me think directly about the many instances over on twitter recently where some g4 purists were harassing g5 fans. twilight sparkle would be so disapointed