An alcoholic gives up on his 25th birthday and turns into a pony. Now she's just trying to get home.
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What an absolute beast of a chapter! You've given us an amazingly climactic battle, the war for Equestria – it offers us this perspective right from the unsung heroes of the original Five Score, close to the ground, contrasting powerfully with and completing what the Mane6 are going through on their side.
It all feels appropriately gritty and violent and desperate and hopeful, and to manage this sustained rhythm so efficiently, it's really no small feat: Staying by Berry's side, we too are confronted to all this chaos, to this suffering, starting off optimistic and courageous, but then getting battered and bloody, it's hard to keep on going... but then we get this second wind, this hope to cling to, and despite it all with her we soldier on, against adversity, until she and her friends manage to overcome this trial.
We keep on jumping from one epic set-piece to another, with a slew of badass characters from across the Five Score-verse, it's hard to pick only one favorite scene! The incredible strength and tenacity of Fleur (must be something with Prench mares!), the ursa's terrifying entrance, the heart-wrenching field hospital scenes, Trixie's apotheosis, and especially how the music pones finally gets to have their proper ending, in the best way possible!
Oh, and that song..! It's just so perfect. It's the ultimate reclamation, the real, moral, cultural-level victory over Discord! It's just beautiful.
This was such an amazing, wild romp, and yet I know it's going to get even wilder as the Berry Bunch heads towards the conclusion!
Well, this chapter was certainly a roller coaster! Every few paragraphs thinking "This is the one, this is were we find out somepony is dead..." And then finding that little tricky lil close call with comet AND pinchy! Now that was dirty! And adding in song! Alsey is certainly quite good a reference for singing. Everyone knows that when the song is playing in a story that nothing can stop them.~ Seeing a bunch of magical ponies all marching and battling the depths of Tartarus while singing is undoubtedly the nightmare of any big baddie ;)
so many Five score story's all rolled in too one and it works so good.
this chapter is just amazing.
And up to date! Here I am already expectant for the end of this great fiction... that I have been following for a month
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And we still have a few wild moments and twists yet!!
The emotional pay offs and a few symbolic parallels finally paying off have been running in the back of my head for years now. I'm excited and nervous to share them soon!
Can anyone say "Diagetic magic songs~?"